...But. We seem to be having a problem with perspective. It looks like she's holding her finger in front of her mouth, and at the same time her hand is in the back of her throat. shot in the dark, maybe add some darker shading on her finger to show that the light source is obstructed or taper the finger towards the tip to make it look further away from the "camera".
Aside from that, very nice throat. Would love to Slide down.
She doesn't seem that comfortable, but it's nice of her to indulge us. It's a little hard to tell if her finger is actually prodding the uvula or just in front of it while it's swaying, though.
Posted by voreingsparten 3 years ago Report
First off Nice drawing...
...But. We seem to be having a problem with perspective. It looks like she's holding her finger in front of her mouth, and at the same time her hand is in the back of her throat. shot in the dark, maybe add some darker shading on her finger to show that the light source is obstructed or taper the finger towards the tip to make it look further away from the "camera".
Aside from that, very nice throat. Would love to Slide down.
Posted by Garber09 3 years ago Report
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback, and you're totally right. It never convinced me fully, tbh, so I think I can make some editing to improve it! <3
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
She doesn't seem that comfortable, but it's nice of her to indulge us. It's a little hard to tell if her finger is actually prodding the uvula or just in front of it while it's swaying, though.
Posted by Garber09 3 years ago Report
Thanks for the feedback! I will edit it to make it look less weird XD
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Good luck!
Posted by Garber09 3 years ago Report
' 3' it is now updated o7
Posted by voreingsparten 3 years ago Report
Looks much better. We knew you could do it :)
Posted by Garber09 3 years ago Report
:D
Posted by Birichino 3 years ago Report
Looks great!
Posted by Garber09 3 years ago Report
Thanks~ :D