Posted by Natolin 3 years ago Report

Wow! This is fantastic! This is some novel level stuff here <3

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Thank you very much! It turned out to be a lot longer than I originally intended it to be, but I got carried away :3 Left out some other ideas I had for potentials sequels, though.

Posted by ModelbeiInsta 3 years ago Report

Sehr gute Story mal wieder. So detailliert und gut geschrieben. Wenn jedes Mal eine so lange Story erscheint lohnt es sich zu warten.

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Vielen lieben Dank, mein Freund! :) Wie gesagt komme ich selber nicht so viel und oft zum Schreiben wie ich gerne würde, daher mit Bitte um Geduld. Mehr ist in Arbeit!

Posted by Littledude 3 years ago Report

Loved the cruel irony of Thomas's fate.

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I had a lot of fun writing this one! :)

Posted by Sidlin 3 years ago Report

This is one of the best stories you've made! Absolutely wonderful, ad I'm glad you're back.

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Thank you very much, Sidlin! :) With all the high praise, I guess I'll be continuing this one!

Posted by srimak 3 years ago Report

I think we all know girls like Tanja in real life. At my workplace we have young ambitious women fresh out from college. Competent and very competitive, result driven and ruthless in their pursuit of career goals. They are also from the uber-narcissistik Instagram generation. I have checked them out on Instagram and ther are picture perfect with divine bodies, round asses and perfect skin and hair. They are also very impatient and think that Boomers (the consider everyone above 35 years a boomer) are a hurdle for their immidiate career advancment. By just taking up positions in the hierarchy that the stunning young girls think they are entitled to. I have no doubt in my mind that if they were able to "shrink the competition" I would probably end up as a wet fart being expelled from between their buttocks.

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

I've always been deeply fascinated (and scared) by our tribal nature, and the way we human beings constantly create a mental division between "us" and "them". We're capable of showing great care and compassion towards the former, and can be utterly cruel and remorseless towards the latter. In that sense, apart from writing niche porn, I'm always trying to describe behaviour I also observe in the real world, with the whole vore thing being just an exaggeration of stuff people actually do to others. Social media only seem to be making this worse, despite their name.

Posted by srimak 3 years ago Report

Civilization is hideously fragile... There's not much between us and the horrors underneath. Just about a coat of varnish, wouldn't you say?... And the same applies to you and me. And the rest of us. There's not much between us and our beastly selves.
~C. P. Snow, A Coat of Varnish, 1979

I fully agree with your observation about the human nature. Obviously, you have elements of science fiction in your stories – shrinking down human beings for example (our kink is an impossible one unfortunately or maybe fortunately?) – but you manage to capture human behavior like an expert. That’s why your stories are sooo good!

As far as I can tell, the Voretex-universe is dealing with criminals in a harsh way - even petty crime offenders. On top of that, people that are poor, losers, incels, unpopular etc, are food for the top tier in the society (I believe that Tanja and friends are in the top tier category). So basically, if you are rich and powerful, you have won the lottery and you can weed out other peoples DNA-strains from the face of earth. Promoting yours DNA and having fun in the process. Not even her country/sports club colleague Pascal was safe, even though he was part of the upper echelon of the society – he was a stoner dork, and he ultimately paid the price.

The colleagues that I was referring to from real life is very charming and likeable. I have experienced situations where they are very flirty with me. Also teasing me at AWs at night clubs like taking my hand and leading my upstairs to have a drink with them, swaying their ass in front of me while scaling the stairs… I am of course not stupid – they are doing that to further their careers by befriending older colleagues that can mentor them or suggest them for promotion. They are only playing a charade where they make me feel attractive, and if I didn’t know better, I would say that we were part of a “tribe”. But the narcissistic young women are only loyal to themselves.

All the social media platforms have created a class of self-centered and narcissistic group of people, that are unimaginably manipulative, backstabbing and cruel. I have seen these (almost exclusively) young girls in action doing their thing, and they really scare me to the bone.

On top of being narcissistic, Tanja is also a real sadist taking pleasure in what she is doing. She talked about not giving Christina a last reunion with her beloved Tommy. I was expecting Tanja to bring Christina with her to the toilet to witness the elimination of Tommy. That would have been cruel… And if Tanja had remembered Tommy, she would probably have done that… but she was busy listening to the birds outside and enjoying her perfect life.

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Yes, the whole shrinking thing obviously is impossible, which is also why I've always handwaved how it actually works in these stories. But when I wondered how a society in which vore is commonplace would work like or justify itself, I found that it probably wouldn't be all that different from the one we already live in. It's a dog eat dog world where a small group of apex predators does most of the eating, and this universe just takes it to very literal extremes.

There also is this tendency in our modern society to spoil young people with consumer goods of all kinds while exerting tremendous psychological pressure on them. They're supposed to be top of their class, be great athletes, look like supermodels, find perfect partners and so on and so on. No wonder they either become insecure depressives or raging narcissists. That's also why I thought it would be fitting for Tanja to have these rich, but constantly absent parents who pamper her materially while neglecting her emotionally. Not to excuse her behaviour or anything, but maybe provide some explanation why she behaves the way she does.

Posted by gaze9991 3 years ago Report

Again.a brilliant story. So good to have you back. I think we all love yoir realistic and casual approach in your stories. I cannot wait to read more, do you have any preferences with regard to films.or clips you watch? For me mukbang viddos on youtube do match your stories very good. I imagine that the sashimis are human beings... maybe you try and watch giröd in thailand eating goong ten... wso thank you again!

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Thanks! It is much appreciated and I hope I will be able to post more soon :) As for videos, I'll watch pretty much anything vore related, though I can wholeheartedly recommend anything made by Ty975/Paramouth Studios or TheWiking2000.

Posted by MrDave 3 years ago Report

"Hi I'm Tanja"

That is terrific, just terrific! One of the best plot twists I've ever read.

She has got a boyfriend?? How?? Does he know about her captives? And what will she do with them?

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Thanks! I'm very glad that part had the intended effect :D

Currently, I don't picture Tanja having a boyfriend, I'd say she get's bored with them too quickly and is the type who sleeps around a lot, but doesn't like committing to anything. As for what happens next, there will be a continuation to this story ;)

Posted by AlbertKwon9182 3 years ago Report

Amazing story as usual! This might be my favorite episode of the Vortex universe.

Posted by VortexFoodsTM 3 years ago Report

Thank you so much! :) This one was a bit different, but a lot of fun to write. Already looking forward to writing the sequel.