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Yay, I finished another story between animations, this time it's back to Marine.

Also, I'm trying out a new thumbnail type so that I'm no longer using other people's thumbnails on my writings.

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CassowarySheriff

Posted by CassowarySheriff 3 years ago Report

Yet more of the hololive gals coincidentally turn out to have a thing for vore. I get the feeling that the climactic chapter of this series is gonna turn out like that Spiderman pointing meme, but with all of the holomems.

TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

At this point it might be faster to find the members who arent into it lol.

GeneralUrist

Posted by GeneralUrist 3 years ago Report



Coco is known to not be a picky eater. So it makes sense for her to not take the time to savor Marine. Clever. Her outright treating Marine as just food is a nice twist.

One thing though: Given the mention of Coco recently eating and the concerns about "slop", it seems weird that no mention of the remnants is made once Marine is inside.

Sure Kanatan, keep denying KanaCoco is a pair... When Coco swallowed Kanata, I was worried she had made a mistake my trapping PPT in super-close proximity with the infamous horni pirate. But I guess Marine's struggles from earlier had depleted her libido. Crisis averted.

Anyways, that was some bittersweet KanaCoco teetee. And great to see the glorious comfort of platonic endosoma show up. The vore virus has found a new method of spreading!

As for the thumbnails, not a fan myself. With just a mughot of one person, in a neutral position, they tell a viewer much less about the story. The number indicating the position of th story in the order is good though.

MysticSummoner

Posted by MysticSummoner 3 years ago Report

I wasn't quite sure what to do for the thumbnails. I just didn't want to keep using other people's art. This is more of a temporary fix than anything... but I don't really know of an alternative to go with is the problem.

GeneralUrist

Posted by GeneralUrist 3 years ago Report

My opinion is that as long as you link to the original source in the description, there's no shame in using other people's art. We can't all be artists on top of being writers.

Also, I hope the wordy comments I tend to make aren't a nuisance. Perhaps it's a bit silly of me to put in that much analysis for a fetish.

MysticSummoner

Posted by MysticSummoner 3 years ago Report

I might just go back to using art like that, but now with the new style with borders and numbers.

Also, I don't mind the long text blocks. It's fun to see your comment on each story.

RasenGun37

Posted by RasenGun37 3 years ago Report

Can you do a Gura one next plz?

MysticSummoner

Posted by MysticSummoner 3 years ago Report

Funnily enough, Gura is the biggest part in the story I am currently in the process of writing.

RasenGun37

Posted by RasenGun37 3 years ago Report

Oh yay!

GurachanUwU

Posted by GurachanUwU 3 years ago Report

Yeah can't wait

GurachanUwU

Posted by GurachanUwU 3 years ago Report

Want to see more of you hope we can't see gura and soon rushia too hope to see rushia and gura with booba xd

GurachanUwU

Posted by GurachanUwU 3 years ago Report

Want to see more of you hope we can't see gura and soon rushia too hope to see rushia and gura with booba xd