Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report

I'm normally someone for present-day scenarios, but I enjoyed this story a lot. Perspective switches are a favourite of mine, and you do this very well here; with Arya being just mildly confused about what is going on and the shrunken people going through absolute hell. At the same time, there is a pervasive sense of black humour throughout this story that had me laughing quite a lot indeed! The first perspective switch sets the tone very well here in just how sudden and unceremonious the demise of the tinies is. I thought these were going to be our protagonists! :D

My favourite part obviously is the vore though, and you even managed to put in both hard and soft vore. Naturally, I would have loved some internals and perhaps even digestion scenes, but that is a matter of personal preferences. I love vore that include the pred eating “regular” food as well and this one ticked all the right boxes for me. Would be thrilled to see more of this in even greater detail if you ever feel like writing something along these lines again!

All in all, a really cool story with a nice premise that covers a lot of different aspects of size change, and just an overall fun read with a nice sense of gallows humour. Looking forward to more stories like this!