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This is a bit of a tricky world to be an orc in - but Zust is rather lucky, as he has an extremely kind Cobber!
Unfortunately, that makes the two of them ideal targets for an unusual exercise...
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This story kinda... wandered in a weird direction, haha. I'm also lousy at sequels, but it feels like I didn't explain nearly as much as I should have.
I also am not nearly as happy with the name, haha, but it is what it is. Titles are hard.
Ah well, hopefully I can get back to this setting at least one more time.
¡Orctober!
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Posted by Zacerine 3 years ago Report
This one was interesting but also a bit confusing. I like how kind the human is to the orc but i dont know what they are to eachother. Also what's happening with the cock vore? The human friend going to be okay?
Posted by Garz 3 years ago Report
Heh, Ghafil /could/ have a lot of control over Zust, but is really nice to him and thus rarely does! Humans in /general/ are concerning to orcs, but Zust is a lot more relaxed when he notices it's Ghafil, for example.
The story did move very quickly, haha - I was hoping that fact was clear enough, but it may not be. Ah, well, if I can get to a sequel it may help with that.
For the last question, there's no fatal nor non-fatal tags on this one for a reason - my usual rule there applies, heh. The Tormentor's motives are unclear, so even though Zust and Ghafil like each other there's a hesitation involved.
Thanks for the comment, though! And yigads I'm behind, sorry it took me so long to respond O_o
Posted by Zacerine 3 years ago Report
Oh no worries. Thanks for the answers. It makes me worried about the human in the story though. He sounds so nice and caring. Always sucks when characters like that end up disappearing. Theres so many of your stories that i want to see a part two to