I think I saw this on DA a while back. It's pretty good. The twist of what Gina is comes out of the left field. You should also double-check some of your capitalizations. In the same sentence, you have "tony" and "Tony" makes it a bit of an eye sore.
Posted by TW 3 years ago Report
I think I saw this on DA a while back. It's pretty good. The twist of what Gina is comes out of the left field. You should also double-check some of your capitalizations. In the same sentence, you have "tony" and "Tony" makes it a bit of an eye sore.
Overall enjoyable though. ;)