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One (Un)lucky Customer By Spider8Fiend -- Report

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After months of hard work, I present to you all "'One (Un)Lucky Customer!" Written as part of a collaboration with my friend,  thatbrassyguy, this is my second smut story involving my characters. Perhaps more will come in the future, perhaps not. Either way, please enjoy this silly, sexy dumpster fire.

I won't lie, OUC was much more fun to write than "A Chance Encounter." The latter is a better story, but OUC has more chemistry between the main characters and develops the world of Mundus in greater detail. That made for an engaging experience, and if I had infinite time, I'd happily showcase more of Mundus and all of the wacky hijinks Rachel & Rebecca get into.

Additionally, I commissioned a number of sketches inspired by this story. Please feel free to check the links below to see them:
https://aryion.com/g4/view/729257
https://aryion.com/g4/view/729258
https://aryion.com/g4/view/729259

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Written in collaboration with  thatbrassyguy

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ThatBrassyGuy

Posted by ThatBrassyGuy 2 years ago Report

I'm happy to have helped make this story possible my friend. I'm also super flattered that it resulted in artwork; stuff looks excellent!

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Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

Daw, give yourself more credit! We worked on this together, we're equal partners! In fact, feel free to post this story onto your own profile. You could also revise your own version of this story, since I did trim stuff out. This left the story with more of my narrative voice than yours, so while the plot is the same, I'd understand if its not YOUR ideal version of "One (Un)lucky Customer."

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HangryDemon

Posted by HangryDemon 2 years ago Report

You never fail to amaze me with your stories and writing

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Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

Daw, that’s sweet of you to say! I just try my best! Don’t forget ThatBrassyGuy either, he wrote his not-so-subtle self-insert character, Brass, into this story too!

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Destroyah23

Posted by Destroyah23 2 years ago Report

Kinda wish Brass stayed alive, I feel like he would've loved having kids. Great story!

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Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

I’m sure he’s in a better place. Maybe he can see his kids from heaven, or maybe Rachel & Rebecca’s tits?

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Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

Ok real good story. Really liked the sisters in this and Brass was neat. The best part honestly was the unique take on perma-pregnancy. We need more of this kind of perma-pregnancy

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Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

I’m glad you enjoyed it! The chemistry of the trio was my favorite part to explore!

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Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

Maybe they should of let him live so they could ask for child support. Given they'll be preggers forever, it's basically a constant stream of money so long as Brass could pay up.

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Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

That would be the smart thing, but you see, the thing is… these two are dumb. In different ways, no less! It’s not really featured in this story, but Rachel is honestly book dumb, never was one much for books, while Rebecca is too proud to admit when she doesn’t know something, so she’ll lie and make shit up. It’s shot them in the non-existent foot a few times.

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Deviantfan16

Posted by Deviantfan16 2 years ago Report

So No child support. Still gotta go about their illicit business. Probably for the best, they might cause alot of trouble if they didn't have money trouble themselves

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Forstand

Posted by Forstand 2 years ago Report

Great Story! Love it!

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Spider8Fiend

Posted by Spider8Fiend 2 years ago Report

I’m glad you enjoyed it! I certainly loved writing it!

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