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My very first story I wrote. It not long, but I do aim to make longer stories in the future. Constructive criticism is very much welcome.
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Posted by DarkKuroi 3 years ago Report
I like it!
Posted by TheHumanPred 3 years ago Report
And I am happy for that !
Posted by DJ4K 3 years ago Report
Nice story. I liked Kimberly's annoyed reaction to seeing people getting vored. I hope you write more because Kimberly is a great character for vore.
Posted by TheHumanPred 3 years ago Report
Same, love making her character !
Posted by Tesuma 3 years ago Report
Pretty good