>> I value critique...
I love the same-size bulge and the definite human shape to it.
The lower center of gravity and the hint that the prey is upside-down also work well.
Her right breast looks off, almost like a man's pec.
It would be sexier if we could see nipple protrusions on her top.
Forgot to add that the lack of clutter is refreshing too.
No complicated clothes; no jewelry. We can easily imagine that there is no underwear and we don't have to wonder how she swallowed someone past a choker or tight blouse.
Posted by ILoveNeneko 3 years ago Report
I would love to see more of this character
Posted by Diamonte 3 years ago Report
>> I value critique...
I love the same-size bulge and the definite human shape to it.
The lower center of gravity and the hint that the prey is upside-down also work well.
Her right breast looks off, almost like a man's pec.
It would be sexier if we could see nipple protrusions on her top.
Her head and face are good enough.
The dialog is grin-worthy.
Posted by anysizebutsmall 3 years ago Report
Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts, glad it was mostly positive!
Posted by Diamonte 3 years ago Report
Forgot to add that the lack of clutter is refreshing too.
No complicated clothes; no jewelry. We can easily imagine that there is no underwear and we don't have to wonder how she swallowed someone past a choker or tight blouse.
Posted by JeebyHeebies 3 years ago Report
That description is a perfect statement about all vore writing
Posted by DonburiBowl 3 years ago Report
Haha, this is wonderful. Love that bubbly speech bubble touch! Poor prey underestimated the power of a dense pred.
Posted by carlj 3 years ago Report
Having the belly going under the dress instead of over it is just....woof