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Tags: Absorption ambiguous prey Betrayal churning corrupted pred Corruption Cruel Pred Delusional Pred Digestion Disposal F/? Fantasy Female Pred first person Futurebellyache multiple digestion nun nun pred optional scat outhouse Pooping Priest priest pred Priestess repeated digestion Returning prey Scat sentient fat sentient pudge Soul Entrapment Willing Willing prey Willing to unwilling prey written work
The head priest and an adventurer meet in the back of the church. This has happened for a long time now, each time they do the same thing, She swallows them, and allows her body to try and digest them. And the adventure does their best to endure it.
The nun's mind changes though, releasing something that her body treats as food has twisted her.
This adventurer may have created something evil.
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This story just kind of... happened. Honestly. I really didn't know what was happening till it was finished. It was meant to be more ambiguous, but then my love of fatal crept in.
And then she turned evil.
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Posted by narutowolfie12 3 years ago Report
Man, what a trip. Really fun story to read through.
Posted by TableManners 3 years ago Report
Great work, and a unique story
Posted by ShinjiIkari 3 years ago Report
What a great story, and completely without prey perspective!
Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report
That's certainly a writing style, and an interesting story! Makes you wish that you could see it all play out..~
Posted by FutureBellyAche 3 years ago Report
I was trying a different perspective here. I thoight about going more in detail, but i wanted it to feel like she was stuck in her own head.
Wasnt sure people would like it, but seems i was wrong.
Posted by TrainerKatrine 3 years ago Report
By playing it all out I also mean the thing that's hinted towards.. :3
Posted by Mrinfo 3 years ago Report
I would like to image one day, years until the future, she goes to trap someone inside her only to either find her spells ineffective on her would be prey or is tricked into poisoning herself. A very good story.
Posted by theonlymatt 3 years ago Report
This is a wonderful story. There's something holding it back from being quite top tier though, but I can't put my finger on it. The story is good and sensible, the Pred's motivations and actions are immersive and very hot. The descriptions are good, the elements are all there and well presented. I've been thinking about it all day and I can't decide what gave me that impression.
I dunno, I might be crazy. Definitely one of my favourites though.
Posted by FutureBellyAche 3 years ago Report
Honestly Im the same, so I can feel ya. I know there was something i should've done to it, but i couldnt think what.
Posted by Mrinfo 3 years ago Report
I think it might be because we don’t really see any interaction from the devoured, nor do we see how far her rampage really makes it. For all we know that soul entrapment spell is all fake and she has none of the saved. Just a speculation and probably not right, but is a desire I wish to know.
Posted by spicysaucego 3 years ago Report
let me score this real quick
Intriguing: yes
Detailed: yes
Good in general: yes
amazing work on this, keep it up
Posted by SwordkingX5 3 years ago Report
I was honestly expecting her to digest the prey, then revive them so she could digest them all over again
Posted by Sauvegarde 1 year ago Report
God: "absolutely do not kill and consume your kin."
Most faithful priestess: "I will consume, then digest my kin. In that precise order."
God: "..."
Most faithful priestess: "and I will bind his soul to my butt!"
Posted by Sauvegarde 1 year ago Report
What I meant with my little meme is that I liked how your priestess gradually convinces herself she's doing God's work as she absorbs more and more of the prey knight and becomes stronger.
It's implied somewhere that this god rewards his most faithful with earthly presents, so perhaps the encounter with such a pliant prey was his work.
Consuming the entire cloister on the other hand, this might have been an overinterpretation of His will :p
Or perhaps not. The Lord works in mysterious ways after all.