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So, this is my first story, it's about the daily life of a student. Warning: English is not my first language (although I'm getting by) so I wrote my story in my native language before I had it translated by Deepl and corrected with my knowledge.
If you are confused by some parts or if you don't understand some sentences, tell me so I can improve these points for my next stories.
Enjoy.
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Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
Great, I finally managed to fix the layout that was fucked
Posted by RaeThePrey 3 years ago Report
There's still plenty of phrases that are a bit off, but it's readable. I believe it's really just adapting your writing style and getting better that would help as opposed to it being translation error.
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
I suspect that my writing and style need to be improved. This is my first story of this style so I'm not used to it even if I tried to do my best to make it as pleasant as possible to read. This story was also to see if what I was writing could please the audience of this site. I will try to improve my style for the next one. Thanks for the feedback.
Posted by 20002000 3 years ago Report
I think this was great. hope to see more.
Posted by DarkKuroi 3 years ago Report
Great!
Posted by bronzelara 3 years ago Report
Id be a gut slut for some sexy older woman or man
Posted by Luffredd 3 years ago Report
Great story. I'm just wondering if any students gets to graduate with that much vore happening every day
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
I had imagined something like: 60-65% of students are preys and 35-40% are preds.
Of these students, 40 to 45% of the preys don't finish their studies and 15 to 20% of the young preds don't either (because they were forced, chosen or just had the kinks to get digested for example). All this is helped by a high birth rate.
(These figures may change depending on how the lore I create evolves, but I think I'll base myself on these data)
(And sorry for the delay of my answer)
Posted by LIamINSecret 3 years ago Report
So are they all permanent or is there some reformation going on?
Posted by Hetzering 3 years ago Report
There is no "reformation" in my universe, all deaths are permanent.