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woo i finally posted again,, the second to last part to this lumine series thing! i have a really cool idea for the last part, so yeaa, be exicted!
this is probably my longest fic so far and i kind of like it! feel free to give me some feedback in the comments since yea, i fucking love feedbackkk
also i've been craving some interaction, so hmu on discord! my user's polar#5205 and i don't bite ;)
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Posted by NotMax 3 years ago Report
Good scenario, but I feel like you're losing the character of Lumine more and more. She doesnt consider eating Paimon because "she has a good heart", does the same not apply to Sucrose? Plus I really cant see genshin characters saying "what the fuck", lol
Posted by Cle0 3 years ago Report
i get what you mean yea, i feel like lumine is a kind of character who you can choose what personality they have since she has very little canon personality, however i get what you're trying to say, thank you for pointing it out :)
Posted by Quartersnake 3 years ago Report
Loving this series, excited to see what Lumine gets up to next! Especially liked the Lisa cameo, too. Short, sweet, and hardly interrupted the story!