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heeelloo so i'm actually still not dead!
i had the sudden urge to write and since my newest obsession is yanfei, i had to write a story for her, of course! i believe she's far too underrated and deserves much more content on this site,, i also love writing her despite how inaccurate i am!
might go on another hiatus after this, but i probably won't! you can most likely expect to see a vore day fic from me unless i end up being lazy,, feel free to request ideas for that upcoming story!
and as always, i love feedback! i appreciate every single comment i receive :)
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Posted by NotMax 2 years ago Report
Love seeing the beginnings of a serial pred, great work.
Posted by Quartersnake 2 years ago Report
Cleo's back! Always a joy to see ya return. The start felt a little rusty, but once you got going, it was another banger! Love Yanfei a lot, she deserves plenty of snacks like Ganyu.
Posted by Cle0 2 years ago Report
thank you for the feedback! :) I always enjoy reading your comments. I might end up giving Yanfei more snacks in the future!
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Glad to see that a character from Genshin Impact was able to inspire you to write a story. I’m on my own timeline to return from a hiatus, so I understand the sentiments. I’ve really been into Kuki Shinobu as a possible predator. There definitely isn’t enough vore content of her on this site yet. Although I have other stories that I have to write before I can get to writing a narrative focused on her.
Kind of curious as to what led you to choose “lime green” for the gastric noises. I might have used a color shade that coincided with Yanfei’s color scheme. Otherwise, it was a splendid story.
Not sure what you have planned for your next story, and I don’t want to constrain your thought process, but here is some “prey” for thought. According to in-game lore Yelan is a risk-taker. She is someone who enjoys pain and has been to clinics to heal wounds with tonics that are slightly painful in several different disguises. (To not arouse suspicion that she has been doing this somewhat intentionally). An interesting fact since Yelan has been depicted as very dominant in every other material so far. When in reality she is a bit of a switch. Could be a nice stepping stone for Yanfei or any other vore narrative you have in mind.
Posted by Cle0 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the idea! Yelan's a very interesting case and someone that I'm unsure if I can write very well, but I don't doubt that Yanfei and Yelan would work well together in a future scenario.
I don't really have any reason for making the gastric noises lime green, but I generally just associate green and gas together in most cases. Although I will consider changing it to the predator's color scheme in the future, I appreciate the suggestion!
Posted by WindSnipe 2 years ago Report
Yanfei my QUEEN