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What's the best way to get rid of an underperforming colleague? John's boss knows the answer.
How is it going guys? It's that time of the month again, where I finally had the time to finish a story! This one is back to my usual style, classic M/F stuff, can't go wrong. with a little cameo from 7egion's Cassandra at the end. Hope you guys enjoy it.
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Posted by Randomdude5 3 years ago Report
Another enjoyable story. :) I an excited to see what else you will write.
Posted by MultipleCacti 3 years ago Report
thank you mr dude. I have to say, I' m quite happy with how this one turned out, myself.
Posted by Randomdude5 1 year ago Report
I will try a longer comment on this story too. I like the setup. John is friends with Sara, so he is probably not in trouble when she calls him. I also like how you made Marie attractive. That make her better to eat. The detail about Sara being unable to fire Marie is also good, because it explains why she didn't.
The details about John being a predator, and having a big red P next to his name are interesting. It seems that vore isn't completely illegal, because John mentions that making Marie disappear would look bad on his record. This assumes that John eating Marie would be found out, and go on his record, and he wouldn't spend the rest of his life in prison. I interpret that as there isn't too big of a legal penalty for eating and digesting someone unwillingly.
The detail about the cooler doors locking from the outside sounds like a safety issue that has never been fixed. Let's just blame it on the corporation being cheap. I also enjoy the detail about John drooling while trying to decide if he should eat Marie.
The details about the time crawling by while John waits for the time to eat Marie really make sense. She is such a tasty treat, and he can't wait to swallow her.
I have worked in a walk-in freezer, and they are freaking cold. People normally need to dress warm if they are going to stay more than just a few minutes in there. I think Marie would be more sensitive to the cold than John would, and not want to stay more than 30 seconds unless she put on some extra warm clothing. If both John and Marie were wearing extra thick coats,gloves and such, that would make it harder for John to swallow Maire.
I like how Marie decides that she wants to have sexual fun with John, but I think that the cold temperatures would distract her too much. During swallowing her, John pulls down Marie's pants. I think this would make her even more cold than she already is from being inside the freezer. I like how he groped her butt, and boobs, but I can't help thinking about the cold.
I like slow detailed digestion, and I like it when the prey can still, so I would have preferred that Marie could breathe inside John's stomach, after he swallowed her, and I would have liked more details about the John digesting Marie after he got home, but this is just my personal vore kinks.
Anyways this was a good story, and I really enjoyed it.
Posted by Bright 3 years ago Report
Fun little read.
Posted by Dudebro2092 3 years ago Report
Fun story, any chance of a sequel?
Posted by MultipleCacti 3 years ago Report
Not very likely for this particular story, and definitely not anytime soon. I have vague plans for one other sequel though...
And thank you for the compliment ;)
Posted by Dudebro2092 3 years ago Report
A sequel to a different story, are we allowed to know which one?
Posted by MultipleCacti 3 years ago Report
When (and if) I eventually get to it, it will be another one of Carlos' adventures (a sequel to Snack and Rescue).