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This seemed like a good idea at the time I wrote this, but it serves absolutely no purpose here. The only reason I didn't delete this, is because the scenario was interesting and I was too lazy to tie together the previous and the next part in it's place.
The more times I read it through, the less I liked it. (and it was a hot mess when I started, so it was tedious to make it into something coherent.) I don't think it's a bad scenario, it just doesn't belong here in my opinion. (Feels like a filler episode)
Hope you enjoy it, though.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Not sure why you think it is bad.
Posted by qawsedkre 2 years ago Report
I don't really know either. Maybe it's because the first version of this was full of repeating sentences and I had to restructure most of it. It was probably the process of fixing it that I didn't like.
Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 2 years ago Report
Claudia is really taking advantage of the situation, good for her!