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Gamer Girl Game O-vored By lijes -- Report

EDIT: Still trying to work through the spacing issue with the paragraphs. I'm open to suggestions! OwO;

EDIT 2: Fixed it!

Well, here's my first ever vore piece!

The more I look at the title the more lame it looks lol.

Also I realize after writing all this that DR3 Chiaki never had any sleeping problem, that was the SDR2 one, crud. Ah well, it's too late now, especially for her lol :P

I just hope I was descriptive enough without adding too many boring details, thank you for reading!

Dunno if I need to add this here but just in case: I do not own the human character depicted in this vore fic that I wrote. The Danganronpa franchise belongs to spike chunsoft

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lijes

Posted by lijes 3 years ago Report

Oh dear god why is there no spacing O_O, I'm fixing that

lijes

Posted by lijes 3 years ago Report

Oh my gosh that worked! Thank you! the letter size still looks a bit weird but that's probably just something I'll learn with experience, thanks!

lijes

Posted by lijes 3 years ago Report

Hey thanks! honestly I WAS considering the digestion part at first, but the more I wrote it the more I visualized it as a fully external POV scenario.

I do think I should have focused on the bulge becoming smaller overtime, I was just not sure how to do that without it feeling too drawn out

The scat part was definitely a fumble on my part as my mind was just on auto pilot by the near-end. But hey, this won't be my only piece I write, and thank you for the watch!

Quartersnake

Posted by Quartersnake 3 years ago Report

Very much agree with CardsBears! Amazing swallowing sequence, nice to the point setup, but I wish there was a bit more digestion. Loved this story, though, excited to see what else you come up with!

lijes

Posted by lijes 3 years ago Report

Thank you! : D