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Summary: The ladies of Hisui are holding a small post-festival party to celebrate the passing of the terror that threatened them from Mt. Coronet. Unfortunately, their catering is unavailable, their entertainment is in mourning, and Akari was unable to attend. Oh? Akari was able to make it, wait why is there more than one of her. “Well, we can clear this…Oh my Sinnoh! Someone stop Arezu!”
Word Count: 22,655
Description: Happy Early Pokemon Day!
This is out a bit early, but this is a long story, and there may be a bunch of other Pokemon content coming soon on this site since Pokemon Day is this Sunday. Thus, I present to you the second story that I have ever crafted. This story went through a bunch of revisions, and I ended up editing it twice. After doing so much, I surprisingly feel less confident than I did before I wrote a single word of this story. There were a lot of moving parts in the story, and I was worried about the number of grammatical mistakes I may have made in crafting this story. Regardless, I hope that you enjoy it enough to comment down below. Let me know if you like this horrendous story, what you liked, and what I can do to improve. I'm not sure if I am better writing longer or shorter stories.
Warning, there are light spoilers for Pokemon Legends: Arceus, so if that bothers you, then you might want to play up to after the fifth Noble Pokemon and before the mainline story final boss. As a character that doesn’t appear until a later part in the story has a minor appearance. There shouldn't be any major story spoilers.
Reference Images:
Arezu:
https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/f/f5/Legends_Arceus_Arezu.png
Cyllene:
https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/9/9f/Legends_Arceus_Cyllene.png
Mai:
https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/d/d8/Legends_Arceus_Mai.png
Irida:
https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/6/68/Legends_Arceus_Irida.png
Palina:
https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/8/8d/Legends_Arceus_Palina.png
Zisu:
https://static.gosunoob.com/img/1/2022/01/seed-of-mastery-pokemon-legends-arceus-640x360.jpg
Mistress Cogita:
https://archives.bulbagarden.net/media/upload/a/a9/Legends_Arceus_Cogita.png
Tied back Hairstyle: https://www.serebii.net/legendsarceus/customisation/hair/female/tiedback.jpg
Side part Hairstyle:
https://www.serebii.net/legendsarceus/customisation/hair/female/sidepart.jpg
Side swept Hairstyle:
https://www.serebii.net/legendsarceus/customisation/hair/female/sideswept.jpg
Curled Hairstyle:
https://www.serebii.net/legendsarceus/customisation/hair/female/curled.jpg
Twin Tails Hairstyle:
https://www.serebii.net/legendsarceus/customisation/hair/female/twintails.jpg
Poll:
Here is a poll for you to vote who your favorite predator was, you could also give a more detailed answer in the comments below. I would love to hear your thoughts.
https://strawpoll.com/8x7ur4gpd
Future Plan:
I am in the middle of writing the Shenhe story. It was a bit rough at first, but I am having a good time. As I was writing it, I noticed that my page had reached one of several milestones. I promised that whenever I reached one of these milestones, I would do this competition. It is a free commission giveaway challenge. Essentially the person who answers the most questions correct by the time I release my next story, or the first person to answer them all correct, would get a free commission from me. Below is the quiz. I would prefer if you PM me your answer response. You can find that option by going to my user page and clicking on the PM button next to the Watch button. You will need to read the story first to understand/answer some of the questions. I can make any clarifications in the comments below. Your story would be moved up in my list and be released sometime next month.
Free Commission Giveaway Challenge
1. What is the cultural trope referenced when Irida slammed the wall, her hands to both sides of the girl?
2. What specific Pokemon is related to the wisps in the story?
3. What is being referenced when Cyllene’s stomach acids begin to digest the girl’s spinal cord?
4. What is another name for Alola Vulpix?
5. Which main female character from Pokemon Legends Arceus is not in the story, or mentioned in the story?
6. Who is the director of the movie being referenced in the title?
7. What is the maximum size digested solid food can be to pass from the pyloric sphincter? To move from the stomach to the duodenum.
Thumbnail Reference: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/95617232
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Posted by Simplespectator 3 years ago Report
Ah. Too cruel in the end for my taste, but well written. Also, I’d answer your ending questions, but I want no commission. Sorry.
Posted by Fatedmeal 3 years ago Report
No problem. I appreciate your honesty. Everyone has their preferences. It is also why I called this a special. If I ever planned on having a continuity for my Pokémon stories. This would definitely be non-canon, more of an experiment inspired by writers of Fate Grand/Order cast wipe stories that I have grown to like. I am happy to hear that it was well written. That was my biggest concern. Since I felt that this was a pretty large undertaking that I decided to do on short notice. If you want to give the questions a try, just to see how well you do, you are free to PM me.
Posted by 0nl1ce 3 years ago Report
Wow, i can see why it took awhile. Was not expecting the johto girls but gladthey got used for prey (especially liked the drunk Arezu). Great work.
Posted by Fatedmeal 3 years ago Report
I’m glad that you liked Drunk Arezu, her dream sequence was actually added in an edit two days ago. As I realized, going through the posts this week, that a lot of people liked Arezu.
I wanted to do a Legends Arceus story, but I couldn’t decide on a single predator. There were some really strong candidates with a lot of works already, but there were also candidates that I wanted to see vore works on this site. So I had to think of a way to include a large amount of prey. Thus, the Johto Kimono Girls answered the call.
Posted by kanek1 3 years ago Report
nice cruel pred
Posted by Fatedmeal 3 years ago Report
Glad that you enjoyed it. Did you have a favorite pred in this story?
Posted by kanek1 3 years ago Report
its hard to tell they have own charm
Posted by Negimalover 2 years ago Report
Question 4 answer is simple and easy, it's Keokeo, a Hawaiian word for spotless white.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
That was a nice fact to learn about. I knew about the name, but didn’t look into or recalled what it meant.
Posted by bellylov3rs 2 years ago Report
Very cruel ending but hey, there was an out right from the beginning, 5 rooms for the girls, Arezu forgetting if there was 4-5 girls, and only 5 were eaten outside the pregnant one, and several were confirmed sisters so Akari escaped the gruesome fate, probably without a clue it had happened and maybe she's off on another adventure in a region of Hisui and the others failed to notice her coming and going. Would make for a hilarious plot point especially if some realized what they might have done like Zisu wrapping her in a bear hug and crying thinking she'd killed the girl she liked.
Plus there's not enough content of PC and npcs together, one always has to be prey to the other and I think all as preds is fun that never gets explored.
As for the preds Cyllene and Palina were the two stand outs with Irida behind them, the 3 have almost nothing vore wise so this was great stuff for them. Along with Zisu they carry that maternal loving energy to them too.
Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the detailed comment on my story which is nearly a year old by this point. Yea, I quite enjoyed writing all of the characters in the story. Although, I felt like I underutilized Arezu in the narrative. However, as you implied, there is relatively much less content of the other woman in the story. So I was happy that this story of mine could fill the gap.