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03 - Mitigating Obstructions [Commission] By NRawk -- Report

Finally, under Mash's supervision Ritsuka's health and mental well being seem to be improving. But, if she's not careful and diligent, other more... 'devilish' Servants may try to get in the way of Mash's hard work.

I had a lot of freedom with this one... like basically complete and total freedom. Thank you Chibi Chi for trusting me with this chapter and hopefully it lived up to your expectations! :D

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TheMysteriousSadSack

Posted by TheMysteriousSadSack 3 years ago Report

I gotta say, the idea of Mash having the power to remove servants from the throne is scary in and of itself. I gotta know though, does that also prevent alternate versions of the servant to be summoned like Summer BB?

NRawk

Posted by NRawk 3 years ago Report

Yeah, I designed Form Camelot to be pretty OP, but Mash is a responsible girl, I'm sure that'll never come back to bite me lol ^^;
As to answer your question... yes, but no; it's complicated (but what in the Nasuverse isn't?)
Um... Let's just say that Gudako was explaining it to the best of her knowledge. There is more to it than she stated and I realize I might not have worded one part the best. But for 'reasons' Summer BB would be fine.

BroTato

Posted by BroTato 3 years ago Report

Form Camelot, considering that The Round Table is designed to gather heroes, it should have a good way to "gather" heroes hehehe

NRawk

Posted by NRawk 3 years ago Report

*Mash poking at a part of her belly* "I think they're somewhere around here, Senpai."

TechniMIND

Posted by TechniMIND 3 years ago Report

Thanks for writing this… I always wanted to see this side of Mash <3 And I’m looking forward for the day when she decides to take full control :P

NRawk

Posted by NRawk 3 years ago Report

Not a problem. Thank you for the trust in letting me choose the direction this chapter went :D

rotta287

Posted by rotta287 2 years ago Report

Congratulations, you have managed to make Mash of all people come off as really scary!

Good job.

NRawk

Posted by NRawk 2 years ago Report

Thank you! Slowly pushing Mash's limits of tolerance without outright altering her base personality has been so much fun.

BroTato

Posted by BroTato 1 year ago Report

Don't want to sound rude or anything but will this be continued in the future?

NRawk

Posted by NRawk 1 year ago Report

Probably. First, I'd have to reopen my commissions, which I might have to put off a bit longer.

Edddd

Posted by Edddd 1 year ago Report

Dawww bummer, I would have loved to see BB seduce an exhausted senpai some more, maybe even get him to perform lascivious/submissive acts for her in exchange for helping him rayhift :P
Though I don't think Mash would've been so merciful then...

Here's hoping you get time, commissions and inspiration for a continuation someday

NRawk

Posted by NRawk 1 year ago Report

Oh, I'm pretty sure BB's part in this story, and by extension her attempts to seduce and capture Senpai's heart, is far from over. Sure, Mash's new ability is terrifying, but Senpai is worth the risk, she'll just have to be extra sneaky from now on ;P

I'd love to get back to this story, so hopefully I can find the time to accept commissions again soon :D

Edddd

Posted by Edddd 1 year ago Report

Whenever it happens, I'll be looking forward to it :)