Uploaded: 3 years ago
Views: 21,283
File size: 131.00 KiB
MIME Type: application/msword
Comments: 10
Favorites: 81
Tags: arknights Big Belly Big Breasts Big Butt Blaze (Arknights) Breast Expansion Ceobe croissant Digestion Doctor (Arknights) Eunectes F/F F/F/F f/multiple Flint Gavial gigantic belly gigantic breasts Huge belly Huge breasts Huge butt Lactation M/F M/multiple prey Mass Vore massive belly Masturbation Multiple Preys Oral Vore Same Size Sex sex in belly Sleeping it off Sleeping pred Soft Vore Story Tomimi Unbirth Unwilling Pred Unwilling Prey unwilling to willing pred Utage Voreception Weight Gain Willing prey
IMPORTANT: This is an accompanying piece to the other variant of One Hot Day. Everything is the same except the conclusion. I listed this as an Alternate Ending because the ending I had written did not fit with the story and how it turned out. Even though I personally prefer this ending, in-world consistency, logic, and reason matter significantly more.
I will now repeat the description for One Hot Day.
I was trying to have this posted by the Arknights - Gavial The Great Chief Returns rerun, but life decided to tell me no so it's coming out now.
As this is an Arknights story, none of the characters are mine and all rights belong to Hypergryph and Yostar. I hope, at least, this story gives the excellent game some extra attention.
If you would like to know what the characters look like, they can all be found on image sites such as Danbooru, Pixiv, or otherwise.
In the pursuit of improving one's craft, it is not unwarranted, shameful, or in any way regretful to ask others for help. Be it a second pair of eyes for a bit of artwork or a critical opinion on your talent with writing, feedback is fundamental to how we improve.
Do not mistake harsh criticism for simply hating on your work. The harshest critics are often the ones that see something they value in your content and can think of ways to make it better. I understood this the same, so I sought the help of someone who I hold deep respect and admiration for. hershey was willing to be critical of my work and my judgment when others would simply tell me "it's good" or "it's alright". My logic was questioned, my mistakes brought to the surface, and my attitudes were challenged on what I held fundamental. I assure you this is not me waxing poetic, all of these statements are true. Even if at times her criticism came off as harsh, I knew it was in my best interests. I could not, would not have done this without her.
To that extent, I consider this a marked improvement over my other work. It is a level I hope to not just reach consistently, but improve upon.
Most of you will not give a fuck because this is a porn site and your erections are stealing your attention, but it matters to me.
Word Count: 9645
Please login to post a comment.
Posted by BubblyPolka 3 years ago Report
brilliant work！！ this ending is so great
Posted by FuzzyTaco 3 years ago Report
I am glad you enjoyed! I enjoyed the ending of this one a lot myself.
Posted by 2good2btru 3 years ago Report
Really liked the story, definitely can see some improvements with the other stories, characters interact with each other more often, slow build up to the lewd scenes rather than just diving on in like with your older works, it definitely shines differently and I hope to see more of these kind of stories.
Posted by FuzzyTaco 3 years ago Report
Yes, I agree. I noticed a lot of poor writing in my work in particular, and I have no desire to repeat it. Jumping right in can work, especially with porn, but you need an appropriate reason behind it coupled with solid character interaction. My Three Minute Meal story has this, and I am still proud of it.
Posted by 2good2btru 3 years ago Report
Yup, some scenarios are good for certain stories and I do agree, character interaction can go a long way to make a story bigger and better, but sometimes you just wanna read a short story that gets to the point, and they all can be enjoyed, it just depends on what you want to write at the moment.
Posted by ShadowSun 3 years ago Report
How naughty of Amiya, but I love this. Not enough M/F Vore of Arknights.
Posted by FuzzyTaco 3 years ago Report
I concur, I will try and write some more in the future.
Amiya is just doing what we would all do if vore was real: invest in recording equipment.
Posted by ShadowSun 3 years ago Report
Entirely understandable. She’ll get much enjoyment out of that film I imagine. Looking forward to more of your work.
Posted by Znonymous 3 years ago Report
whats the differnce?
Posted by FuzzyTaco 3 years ago Report
The ending, as I say in the title and description