So here's my first actual story! Honestly it was kind of exhausting to write 9,700 words or something like that, but I'm currently in the middle of watching Bleach and so I really felt the need to write something with the characters. Rukia's definitely been a standout character for me and I've always liked the smaller girls being the ones who eat, so it all just kind of came together one night.

I had some help proofreading it, wanting to make sure my first real tale was formatted correctly for the website, sorry if anything still looks out of place though!

Something I've kind of come to realize when writing stuff like this is it's hard to approve of your own work, even if you did something for fun or validation, you need an outsider look to tell you it's good or not. That said, I wouldn't say this is great or anything, but I did try.

Any feedback is very appreciated, but just viewing it at all means the world to me that I can provide something that makes others smile, so please be sure to tune in for more later!

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