I'm back with what I can hardly call a story, more just another case of writing practice. I wanted something to do in the meantime until I had finished the show I want to write my next actual story for, which will be F/F so in the meantime I hope this little thing can keep aspiring fans occupied! I like more than just girls eating girls so I try to keep girls eating things that aren't girls to these smaller tidbits and make the main stuff my bigger works.
The inspiration of course this time comes from the first event in Priconne's game, Hatsune's Perfect Present where she gives Shiori a picture book since she loves reading, for her birthday. Of course this goes wrong since the book was cursed and out comes a huge bird (possibly called Jizu but in-game it seems to be Ziz) and they have to kill it. Of course in the game they just blast it with their final attack but that's boring for Eka's, so!

If it seems strange that they don't look alike, are different species and there's talk of things like magic powers, there's really no explanation beyond the fact that Priconne's world is a fantasy video game-esque world, so there's a separation of races and classes that I can't get into because this isn't the place for it and it would be too deep into the story of the mobile game, so! You've probably at least seen the anime for this, since it has two seasons out now. I do believe both of the sisters appear in it? Either way--
I feel like I may have rushed this one a bit, or maybe it's the fact that I started at the end of the fight so the context just feels messy to me? I'm sure there's plenty of places I could have improved on, but honestly I just loved the idea of Shiori shoving the whole bird in her stomach so I wanted to make a thing revolving around that, if not just for my own satisfaction.
Thank you again to two of my wonderful friends who helped make sure the story was in readable condition, I'd lose my own head if it wasn't for the kindness of so many people around me.

Feel free to give your criticisms if you like, I always like to learn from others and improve where I can for my next work, which will hopefully be more controlled and shaped than this little one hour project was.

I've linked a reference to what the sister's look like here, Hatsune on the left and Shiori on the right.
https://i.imgur.com/d4ONsBJ.png

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