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A gift for my good buddy Kainan featuring his OC Airi Kitamura that doubles as a sort of introduction story for my own OC, Yu Tokikage.
It's a 20000 word long story written from the second person perspective... so suffice to say it's a pretty long one.
Gotta love me some gyarus.
Thumbnail also by the amazing Kainan
Relatively spoily talk below.
The story itself is written in the form of a VN in which the main character has the strange subconcious ability to go back to a choice that will end up with his death but without actually being aware of making the choice. So while it technically has three endings it... kind of only has one? Try not to think about it too hard.
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Posted by DeadStrategicCactus 3 years ago Report
Third choice had me curious as to how it was going to go and it certainly didn't disappoint. Definitely looking forward to the future installments of Yu's misadventures.
Posted by Vozpazta 3 years ago Report
Thank you.
I'm looking forward to writing Yu's next misadventure too.
Posted by Fatedmeal 3 years ago Report
Wonderful idea, execution, and story. This is probably a little telling of my preferences, but I think the second choice was my favorite. Great Job!
Posted by Vozpazta 3 years ago Report
I'm very happy you enjoyed the story.
Yu is a very enjoyable character to write and there's definitely going to be more stories like this one soon.
Posted by Flipnotefan96 2 years ago Report
So I noticed the 4 that popped up during his second meeting. I imagine that he said no, and things went rather poorly from there, and as a result was sent back. It’s a nice touch, as it shows the way his ability can work, as well as alert the reader where things went wrong, without really needing to go into things. I actually really like the ability, and am excited to see even more.
Posted by randomuser13579 1 year ago Report
I like that the protag that’s both smart and lacks morals considering the world he is in.Kinda hopes he meets more preds if there’s a next installment.Option 3 was definitely my favorite.