Nicely done. I kind of like the fact that she didn't even get her third wish- I started the story already expected the third one to be her undoing, as many "evil genie" stories go.
I'm normally not much for insect preds, but you pulled this off wonderfully. Nice and indeed, very creative ending. I liked it. I had thought that the genie would deal with her, not a simple spider! Yay for the spider!
^-^
-GoldFox
Posted by SeruOmen 18 years ago Report
Nicely done. I kind of like the fact that she didn't even get her third wish- I started the story already expected the third one to be her undoing, as many "evil genie" stories go.
Posted by GoldFox 18 years ago Report
I'm normally not much for insect preds, but you pulled this off wonderfully. Nice and indeed, very creative ending. I liked it. I had thought that the genie would deal with her, not a simple spider! Yay for the spider! ^-^ -GoldFox
Posted by Anonymous 17 years ago Report
love
Posted by Terris 17 years ago Report
Ohhh. That was very clever. Great story!
Posted by tacaloking 12 years ago Report
can you please repost this theirs nothing there
Posted by V 12 years ago Report
You have to press the download button