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Look, I know Beau's accent is terrible. It's supposed to be terrible. It works on the ladies mostly because of how damn sexy he is.
This story was suggested by cerealkillerx who gave me the beginning, middle, and end. I just hung pretty baubles on the Christmas tree of their idea.
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Posted by cerealkillerx 2 years ago Report
Looks like it’s Cajun food tonight for our hungry gator :P
Holy crap that was one hell of a read! The sheer helplessness and desperation was deliciously palpable in this story!
Thank you so much for taking my suggestion! ^^ I absolutely enjoyed every single moment of poor Beau’s demise.
Posted by Mouthful 2 years ago Report
Awesome! I'm really glad you liked it!
Posted by cerealkillerx 2 years ago Report
Anytime! I also loved your incorporation of an old urban legend from Louisiana folklore. It just makes the story even more sinister! ;)
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I wonder if the alligator remembers Tanner.
I have the idea of the alligator being a supernatural creature, who approaches Tanner afterwords, Prehaps using beau as a hostage to toy with him.
Posted by Mouthful 2 years ago Report
I don't know if the alligator remembers Tanner, but Tanner definitely remembers the alligator. I'm crap at following through with planned sequels, but in the follow up to this story that I have in mind, Papa does exhibit some slightly otherworldly abilities.
Posted by cerealkillerx 2 years ago Report
That’s actually quite interesting to hear. I did not know you had a planned follow up story in mind. I would imagine Tanner is experiencing some sort of grief and suffering a form of survivor’s guilt so he longs to end his life by giving himself over to same hungry jaws that claimed his friend.
Posted by augustthedragon 2 years ago Report
Ooh, id love to see more of Letiche. imagine him taking away everyyone tanner loves until Tannner gives in and feeds himself to papa...
Posted by Willard 2 years ago Report
This story is hot! It's a shame Tanner couldn't pull Beau to safety. Maybe, instead of grabbing onto his legs or ankles, Tanner should have tried grabbing onto Beau's sturdy dick instead. For a better grip, am I right?
Posted by Mouthful 2 years ago Report
Surely that thought crossed Tanner's mind at some point!