Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Finally found some time to look at some of your stuff!

I know you suggested 'Caramel Treats', but since it seems this one technically comes first, I gave it a read first. xD

But yeah, this was a fun story, with a very satisfying blend of plot-density and vore. The circumstances and conversations between Faelyn, Shyala and Wanda all worked great to establish their characters and hint at the winder world surrounding them, without sacrificing the pace or interfering with the action.

And it certainly feels like Wanda has some strong opinions about the political landscape, and isn't afraid to 'express' herself about them. x3

Good stuff, it's really nice to see new writing from you again! (I know it's a year old, but it's new to me! xD)

Posted by MysticAzure 1 year ago Report

Thank you Dood! And yeah, Wanda is very outspoken about her opinions, which actually does put her in trouble from time to time XD

It's okay if you start here, I think this would give you proper context when you go into Caramel Treats, hehe.