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"Shinji... what if commander Ikari finds out that was only a dummy you crushed?"
"...screw 'em. Let him have a heart attack... by the time he figures anything out... you'll no longer be a threat, and we can still be together..."
"...and when... Misato gets back to her apartment?"
"...oops...well... she'll probably be too drunk to be able to tell the difference."
For Kaworu.
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Posted by Kaoru 18 years ago Report
I...don't know what to say. When I first saw this picture, I teared up a little... I ... I'm still a bit choked up. I thought about waiting until I could type without a little smile, think without that warm glow in the back of my mind running throughout my body, and comment without worrying about being biased. I decided that two weeks was too long a wait, as I doubt I'll be able to feel normal again for at least that long. There's nothing I can possibly say that could fully express what I'm feeling right now, but I'll at least try to comment on the art. To start off with, you've got a very nice background. I can't quite place where the two of them are - is that a cave, with the moonlight shining in the background? And what's that linked to it? ...Incidentally, are those just glows from the outside, since there's another one on the far side of the picture? Anyways, onwards... I think the skin-tones in this are slightly exaggerated, but they're still very fitting to the characters, and the two differing tones help to set off one another. They really make the lack of thick lines around most of the stomach border work. Light is used well in this - light at the edges of the picture, darkness around the two boys, and light actually on them and the discarded plugsuits. The poses in this picture are very fitting, as well - both of the subjects appear very relaxed, and very fond of one another, and the accompanying conversation seems, if not canonically correct, still rather appropriate to the image itself. I know that, not being an artist myself, I have no authority to criticize any part of this picture. So you can feel free to ignore anything below this point, as I'm not even entirely comfortable including it - I'm happy...very, very, very happy...with this picture, just as it is. But looking at it from an analytical perspective, I have to admit that others may mind things that I do not. I am not going to get into nitpicking details here - you're a smart, and unconceited person, any purely physical abnormalities I'm sure you can spot, yourself. That said, I realize I have nothing else to harp on negatively except little physical details, and so I guess I have little to say in that regard. Considering I didn't pay you, didn't do anything for this, considering that I barely even know you, I feel like I don't deserve this. It's a picture that really makes me feel good - not just the subject matter, which is fun to see, but the fact that you'd do this absolutely makes my day, Sai. Thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
Posted by Chrisis 18 years ago Report
very well done, I ain't a male vore fan but your shading is pretty *drools* did you create that background from scratch or did you do a cut out of an image?
Posted by Saiai 18 years ago Report
Ah, thanks guys! :D You're very welcome, Kaoru. There were actually a few more physical mistakes that would really have shown if I hadn't corrected them, but Kaoru's skin tone was a tad tough to get, being rather fair. And to both, as for the background, that's a futon, on the ground, in Shinji's room. There are some lamps as well, and it's dimmer than the original photo was, trying to give it a relaxed "candlelight" feel. Manipping a photo for a background is what I usually end up doing - giving it a very vague, blurred or even painted feel to cast the background itself aside and help it highlight rather than overtake the subjects. And canonical dialogue? You should know by now what a silly person I tend to be. I'm one of the hugest fans of "ReDeath" out there. Oooooooooh BABY. Anyways, I'm VERY glad ya like it. :)
Posted by karlyboo 18 years ago Report
very good :3 i love it- his belly looks so hot with his lover bulging inside it! :)
Posted by Jrrrobert 18 years ago Report
I don't want to get in to how much Eva means to me, XD I wrote a thesis on it. Kaworu might be my favourite character. While I try to avoid porn, vore, or pretty much anything fan-made XD about Eva, I do like this one. Good work.
Posted by 2plantains 18 years ago Report
Cute cute CUTE. Hot hot HOT. I have nothing articulate to say.
Posted by CrimsonShadow 12 years ago Report
Wow, really really fucking late to this one. Okay, I'm not a M/M fan, neither am I a yaoi fan, but I am a ShinjixKaworu fan (and Kaworu fan in general), thus I really do enjoy this picture.