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Tags: Alien alien girl alien prey belly mouth bone breaking Bones Casual vore Cosmic Horror cosmic horror pred Demon Demon pred Demoness Demoness Pred Female Female Pred Female Prey Futa pred Futanari Gore Graphic digestion Hard Vore human female human male Human Prey Lovecraftian horror Maid Maid outfit Male Prey Monster Monster Pred Rape Same Size Same sized vore Semi-unwilling semi-unwilling prey Semi-willing Story Tentacle tentacle rape torso mouth Unwilling Unwilling Prey written story written work
Hello there! this here story features my character Aza the interdimensional void demon. if you want to see what see looks like in her entirety you can check her out here: https://aryion.com/g4/view/798255
if the tags aren't clear enough, this is a pretty graphic story. be warned.
in this story the space horror monster Aza discovers humans and apparently they are very tasty.
tell me what you think about this story :)
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Posted by Yalo 2 years ago Report
I like it and I want more of Aza.
But In my opinion the writting format it's a mess, like sometimes there is to much space between paragraphs sometimes it's too tight.
And the writting feels lose, like it's not written its like you're badly telling me the story in person.
Idk, but again I like it.
Posted by fastwaffle 2 years ago Report
i don't really know what happened with the spaces, it did not look like that when i was writing it. i guess it might be the format or the program? i'm not an expert so i don't actually know.
as for the story feeling like its being badly told in person, not quite sure what you mean. what is something supposed to look like when its "written" as you put it.
i do appreciate feedback and i would like to improve.
Posted by emikochan 2 years ago Report
Good story ^^
Posted by fastwaffle 2 years ago Report
oh wow, i did not expect to see you here! thank you for liking my story! :D
Posted by leonthegreat 1 year ago Report
Neat story. Im not usually one for such cruel lreda though
Posted by fastwaffle 1 year ago Report
i guess my preferences aren't suited for everyone, but that's okay. thanks for reading my story anyway :)
Posted by leonthegreat 1 year ago Report
No prob bob