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Tags: Belch Belching Belly Burp Burping burping up clothes burping up items burping up objects Casual pred Casual vore Digestion Disposal F/F F/M Fart Farting Fatal Female Pred Female Prey Gas Gassy Gassy Pred Male Prey Oral Vore Pooping Scat Soft Vore Toilet Unwilling Unwilling Prey writing written work
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WARNING: CONTAINS DISPOSAL
This one was inspired by a discussion in a Discord server. I like video essays a lot, but I’d probably like them a lot more if they were like this lol.
Commission done by the wonderful Brazzel .
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Posted by mrminceman 2 years ago Report
This is a great story idea!
Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report
Thank you! Brazzel did a great job framing it as a sort of "urban legend".
Posted by Nikkidafox 2 years ago Report
This is very interesting! It kind of gives off creepypasta vibes, except instead of scary, it's hot. Well, it's scary to most probably.
Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report
Yeah! I think framing the story as a sort of internet urban legend/creepypasta gives it a unique feel. A very HOT feel lol.
Posted by Tsavo 2 years ago Report
I love perspective stories like this that describe the observer's feelings as they watch a recording of a pred.
Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report
Yeah! It's a unique twist on the observer POV that I also really like.
Posted by Trying124 2 years ago Report
This was just terrific. Lovely description of the observers process and the fart and burp is terrific
Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! Gassy preds are the best, aren't they?
Posted by whatthehawk 2 years ago Report
Nice story, but there’s one bit of errata: the post says it was written in 2016, but then mentions that Vivianne’s channel pivoted format in 2018. Either the channel pivot needs to be brought forward, or the post needs to be pushed back (or both).
Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report
Oh no! I thought I did a good job proofreading for errors, but I guess I missed one :(
Pretend those years are switched...
Posted by Brazzel 2 years ago Report
Time...travel? Time travel.
Posted by bajillionandone 2 years ago Report
Yes, let's go with that
Posted by KittyKayBee 1 year ago Report
I absolutely love stuff filtered through media like this! Gosh, you've got a knack. Would love to see more in this vein from you.
Posted by bajillionandone 1 year ago Report
I'm glad you liked it! I'm not actually the author though, as I commissioned the extremely talented Brazzel to write it. I do have some other stories I'll probably post soon, but if you can't get enough of this writing style I suggest you check out Snakethroat Books :)
Posted by KittyKayBee 1 year ago Report
Cannot believe I missed that detail there - guess that's a second kudos that it whizzed right past lol
Posted by bajillionandone 1 year ago Report
No worries, perfectly understandable! This might be my favorite story I've commissioned, top 3 at least, so knowing that others appreciate it too brings me joy :)