3 sailor girl stranded on useless raft with no way to travel the ocean. Stranded between the blue-dept and the sky. Walled by the everlasting thunder storm that sinking various ship throughout history. luckily they are heading in opposite direction of the storm by the ocean wave beneath the raft toward the soft and still wave of the ocean surface . Still no islands on the horizon . no food no harpoon they desided to sit still on the raft to conserv energy . everything went well for a while... until something drive bombing them... made one of the girl to fall into the ocean... and then another being come out of the ocean... rightnow the fallen girl is very warm... with her friend watching her fearfully...unknowing the fate of their wet and warm friend on other side of the raft... (this one is my first attempt on story focus on narrative and detail of the situation so it have a lot of text and it a good ending version. I hope you enjoy )

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