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Tokugawa Digestion Labyrinth - Floor 2 By Vozpazta -- Report

The long time coming second part of the Tokugawa Digestion Labyrinth Castwipe, featuring more maidens, more Servants and more humiliating ends than you can shake a stick at!
At 41,000 or so words, it might just be my longest story ever!

Commision for  elliotalien08

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Azoon

Posted by Azoon 2 years ago Report

I welcome the return!

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Wow that ending was something else. Really creative take on a humiliating end. I have to say this is one of those cases where the sequel is better than the first one.

Perv404

Posted by Perv404 2 years ago Report

Forgive my ignorance but: Whats the name of the character in the thumbnail link? I'm having some difficulties finding her.

Vozpazta

Posted by Vozpazta 2 years ago Report

That's one of the Ooku maidens, an NPC enemy from FGO
https://fategrandorder.fandom.com/wiki/%C5%8Coku_Joch%C5%AB

Perv404

Posted by Perv404 2 years ago Report

Thanks.
There doesn't seem to be much lewds of said NPC. What a shame.
I think Limebreaker or Ber00 could do a good job drawing her with expanded assets.

Perv404

Posted by Perv404 2 years ago Report

A long and packed vore-smut story with many characters and fates. Lots of CV and CTF, my favorite methods of vore and transformation.

Some constructive criticism:
- A little more proofreading to help iron out mistakes would add some polish to the final product.

- Possibly a slight overuse of 'as' in some places. it may be a common trap for writers and roleplayers.

- More punctuation (when appropriate) could help divide the paragraphs into managable chunks.


Looking forward to the next chapter (floor).