Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report

Name tag wise, my only concern in bias is a lack of Yuuka Kazami's face, in massaging her newest seed.

Bar that. This is certainly a good prompt as ever, to get back into writing on my end. Been really meaning to at some point, do/cover that Alice 2hu take, Marisa wise.

Posted by acrylic 2 years ago Report

Maybe I might have drawn her face in the next page where Marisa only remains as a lonely seed deeper inside her, so Yuuka is finally satisfied,, if I drew it.
I will be looking forward to see your next writing too.

Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report

In all due respect. That next time might be sooner than you think, ohoho~

... But alas. I'd probably imagine Alice going full Danmaku duel/angry over Yuuka, keeping Marisa inside her 'maidenly chamber', or 'seed bank' forever. With no interest in letting her out, or even "sprout". :)

Posted by acrylic 2 years ago Report

Exactly.
Yuuka is dominating but not maternal, at least to her preys.
Yuuka clearly distinguishes whether one is her baby or her trophy, and even if she still has maternal feeling hidden inside her, she is not that impulsive enough to be overwhelm by that kind of feeling.
Sorry for Marisa. She is certainly in a safe and warm place, but that warmth and security is not toward Marisa.

Posted by LemonBarb 2 years ago Report

One more stray thought, in relation to my unbirth story involving Yuuka. Nominally, she'd have just crushed any 'annoyance', prey wise. If going by say, Youkai logic. "Genocide is a game" wise and all.

Whatever fate befell Marisa to be entombed within Yuuka's maidenly organ, is less a 'mercy', more a well. 'Privilage', to Yuuka's own, predatory desire.

End game being, she's stuck at the flower maiden's mercy, for the rest of her long-lived life. And it'd be on a whim, if she'd think of letting a "flowered" Marisa bloom, or preserved deep within her sex.

Posted by acrylic 2 years ago Report

Yeah I can easily imagine a story themed “a seed’s dream”