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Picking right where we left off, Amy's caught Nate and Becca with a jar full of shrinkies. Is this the end of the ride for the two troublemakers, or can they find a way to stop a good girl putting an end to their fun?
This is a direct sequel to "A Meeting with the Spider" ( https://aryion.com/g4/view/825278 ) and part 3 of the "Worth a Shot" series.
Please let me know what you think in the comments, I really appreciate the feedback and it's good motivation to keep going with these.
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Posted by muslone 2 years ago Report
Very nice direction with this story and keeps you intrigued and interested in the next chapter in the arc.
Posted by TinyHunter 2 years ago Report
Thanks!
I always try to tease a little bit of what might come next to keep people wanting more. Even though we resolve the storyline kicked off in "A Meeting with the Spider" here, there's that slight escalation of Nate and Becca's exploration of these new thrills that might lead to something more...
Posted by WestofJames 2 years ago Report
Agreed! Another great story. Very interested and hopeful that this series continues. Awesome work!
Posted by TinyHunter 2 years ago Report
I've started writing the next part, but I'm not sure when it will be finished. I'm going for a comparable length to the previous chapters, but the situation is a bit more dynamic which makes the process a little slower.
Posted by pierreclein 2 years ago Report
Very interesting story!
Posted by Animo24 2 years ago Report
Really awesome storyline i love it
Posted by VortexFoodsTM 2 years ago Report
And another great episode! I kind of assumed this was where things were headed, but it was still a delight to read it play out in all its glory! Amy is yet another marvellous addition to your pred cast and quite distinct from both Becca and June.
Once again, your writing here was excellent. Amy's change of heart regarding the tinies feels plausible. At first, she mainly gives into peer pressure, and then also appears to find more than just a little pleasure in the power she has over Jessica. And now that she has eaten a tiny herself, she won't really able to go back anyway, so she might as well indulge that darker side of hers.
I really enjoy this pattern you are using here, with every episode so far being dedicated to a particular pred, it's what I do with most of my stories as well. I'm already excited to see who is going to be the focus of the next episode!
Given that you have put out an enormous amount of high-quality writing in a very short time (as far as I can tell, five 20-ish page stories in only two or three weeks), my only "advice" would be to to not overdo it. Wouldn't want you to burn out, planning all this and writing it must have been a tremendous amount of work!