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Vulpes Zerda: Torn Flower By Fatedmeal -- Report

Summary: Aether and Paimon have arrived at Sumeru. After a long journey and many arduous trials the adventurer are unsure of what to expect in Sumeru.

Word Count: 15,549

Disclaimer: A bunch of male and female pred scenes. I didn’t put any disclaimers for either of them as I felt it would disrupt the flow of the story. There are also scenes with a teenager pred, boy prey, and a girl pred of questionable age (a young elf that is 40+ years old…she is younger than you think).
Thus, I put a table of a spoilery table of contents below the references section for people who have preferences of scenes.

Author’s Note: This story emerged from an art trade that  Thor11 gifted me from  BlueB140. https://aryion.com/g4/view/821547. This is the second story with a male pred in my gallery. I definitely enjoyed writing some parts more than I expected. Compared to my other story I would say that this is more Male Pred heavy despite there being more female characters in the story. Regardless, let me know what you think of this story. I would also look at the character references if you would like a visual for the character. Especially if you aren’t familiar with Genshin Impact. As I didn’t bother describing their appearance as the length of the story would have ballooned even further. I would also like to reiterate the table of contents is to help navigate to the scenes that you want to read if you are only a fan of one of the following and don’t want to read the feast: M/M, F/M, younger Pred/Prey.

Character Reference/Thumbnail Reference:
1. Right click on link and press open link in new tab.
2. Copy the link and paste it onto a new tab.
3. Don’t know what to tell you, you have to type in the character’s name and franchise in the search bar and find the image yourself.

Lumine & Aether (Left and Right respectively): https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Traveler?file=Traveler_Card.png
Paimon: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Paimon?so=search&file=Character_Paimon_Card.png
Klee: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Klee?file=Character_Klee_Card.png
Tighnari: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Tighnari?file=Character_Tighnari_Card.png
Collei: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Collei?file=Character_Collei_Card.png
Beidou: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Beidou?file=Character_Beidou_Card.png
Kokomi: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Sangonomiya_Kokomi?file=Character_Sangonomiya_Kokomi_Card.png
Venti: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Venti?file=Character_Venti_Card.png
Dehya: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Dehya?file=NPC_Dehya.png
Albedo: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Albedo?file=Character_Albedo_Card.png
Chongyun: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Chongyun?file=Character_Chongyun_Card.png
Kamisato Ayaka: https://genshin-impact.fandom.com/wiki/Kamisato_Ayaka?file=Character_Kamisato_Ayaka_Card.png

Thumbnail Reference: https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/99705820


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Table of Contents of Preds (Beware of Spoilers):

First Petal: Klee Pred (young elf)

Second Petal: Tighnari Pred, Collei Pred Beidou Pred/nameless boy prey

Third Petal: Kokomi Pred, Venti Pred

Fourth Petal: Tighnari Pred, Collei Pred, Albedo Pred

Fifth Pred: Chongyun Pred, Kamisato Ayaka Pred

Zero Petals Remain: Lumine Pred, Tighnari Pred

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Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

So what exactly happens, for those who had trouble following the plot.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Spoilers

Aether and Paimon follows this women. The incense in the environment caused Aether to have hallucinations. Two people eat Aether and Paimon. Aether experiences hallucinations for nearly the entire time of his close associates eating him in various circumstances. Until he finally gives up. Story ends with Tighnari (the actual person that ate Aether) disposing of him.

Mechdragon1k

Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report

That what I thought happened but was not sure.
Is Tighnari going to regret eating the traveler, sounds like her sister would be crushed.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

I would leave that to the interpretation of the reader. A written narrative is an interaction of an author and the audience through a medium. One that evokes feelings depending on the internal and external environment of the reader. Thus, I don’t want to color how you perceive the story would proceed after the point that I stopped it at.

Kaguya1

Posted by Kaguya1 2 years ago Report

jeeeeeeeez...you really struck a super good balance between writing the males and females!
especially tighnari, pretty proud to have rolled for him now after reading this, the way you went on about him doing feminine stuff was...WOW <3
at least to me, you are consistently smashing it out of the park and i am STRUGGLING to come up with nice or tasteful things to say without coming off as a dumb little degenerate (:
but your work really does mean lots to me and i'm always happy to see what you come up with

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Thanks. I tried to even out there scenes as best as I could.

And the sentiments are shared about being glad about rolling for Tighnari. I also agree that my some of my favorite parts of the story was writing about those particular Tighnari scenes.

Regardless of what you think about the quality of your comments, I am more than happy to have them from a fellow degenerate.

I hope that I’ll have more stories for you to latch on to in the future.

Justsomeone

Posted by Justsomeone 2 years ago Report

Wow, this story blew me away. Tighnari is like... woof

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Yea, I was an absolute fan of how I wrote this story as well. Even returned for a read myself a week after I posted the story. I would have favorited this story myself if it wouldn’t make me look so vain in doing so. Alas, I will just have to be content with the story being nestled nicely in the digital crevice of my gallery. Any particular Tighnari scene that you enjoyed.

For me it had to be the Tighnari disposal scene. The juxtaposition with Amber’s letter was just the 100% cocoa bitter tragedy that I look for in stories.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

I’m not even sure where you wanted to bury your face (I can think of three places) but the sentiments are shared. The bloated corpulence that was his tummy as it groaned under the jungle moonlight. His rotund cheeks that were fattened into plush and meaty tahchin cakes. And the third place I won’t dare say and leave it to your imagination. His seamless figure draped in a soft and svelte nightgown that refracted the ambient light.

However, I would say that you shouldn’t shy away from gushing about what you liked, as I am doing the same. As I enjoy talking about my stories and it helps me know what I’m doing right or wrong.

As this was my first true foray in a M/M Pred story. Even though it was quite mixed. The one that ultimately did the deed was unquestionably Tighnari. I’m glad to hear ideas and suggestions of what readers like you would want to see in a male pred story as compared to a female pred story.

In short, continue burying yourself into this hole we found ourselves in Justsomeone.