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Henry, Rebecca and Kyle's family partake in tradition that instills fear into the three siblings. When they find out their grandmother is coming over for dinner, they fear which one of them is next.

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rugli

Posted by rugli 2 years ago Report

What lovely Tradition here a Grandmother that eats her grandchildren out of affection for them :) Regardless of how the Grand children feal about being on Grandma's menu. :)
Now with that said I would love to see more on these characters :)
so I think this could do with ether prequel or/and sequel depending of course how you feel about it :)

Kroton68

Posted by Kroton68 1 year ago Report

You're a masterful writer. I really feel for the siblings, but also envy them.

Mentald

Posted by Mentald 1 year ago Report

Kyle was sleep talking and he talked about having sex with Rebecca this made granny figure out that Rebecca saved herself with incestrual sex with her brother this makes grandma so angry that she swallows Kyle,Rebecca and even mom for letting it happend and takes some pills to slow her digestion so they will suffer more then she shits them in the living room and goes to her house at farm where she reforms them and makes them work on it with other people that she ate at least they saw thier siblings again.
there is no fatal tag so...

Datstrudel

Posted by Datstrudel 1 year ago Report

Please stop changing my endings in the comments.