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Or, “What’s in the Cards for Her”
When a new face joins a card game with potentially-dangerous consequences, just how will the fate of the players turn around? Or, is it too late for their fate to change...?
I swear, any surface-level similarities between this story and the last one are purely coincidental. I think. I'm pretty sure.
As is usual with my stories, this one is the product of me tying together a smattering of long-standing and short-standing ideas in my head with a variety of thin threads, some of which didn't get put into place until the last minute. But as usual, I hope you enjoy.
(Edit) Here's a prequel / sequel to this one, "Do It For Her": https://aryion.com/g4/view/842155
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Posted by skorpio 2 years ago Report
This is SUCH a creative idea! I love the little mental world you made for the prey with its own rules and everything!
Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report
Thank youuu! The setting was a big focus for this one. Tying in the items they use in the fight with the paraphernalia in the room, then tying THAT in to their past adventures, was actually a last-second addition, but I hope it made this world feel a little more lived-in and believable!
Posted by rotta287 2 years ago Report
Holy crap, this weird purgatory idea is fucking amazing.
The different people forming sentient pudge being able to shift around on the pred by eating each other is hilarious to think about too. Just imagine the embarrassment Brain would feel when on of her assets suddenly absorbed all the other one in public.
Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report
Thank you!! Yeah, this is a setting that's been sitting in my head for a while, so I'm glad people seem to like it! Hopefully I was able to bring it to life in a way that lives up to the concept's potential.
When I thought about the idea of pudge shifting around based on them eating each other in the shared subconscious world, I knew it was too funny NOT to write a story about it. Might have been fun to focus on that detail more... but another time, maybe!
Posted by SirMuffin 2 years ago Report
You put a lot of effort into this wow. I kind of like how there's this undercurrent in the story where the prey realize they're suffering a fate worse than death but try to not acknowledge it too much.
Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report
Thanks. I try to make everything I put out into something special, so I'm glad you noticed! And yeah, these folks sure have a complicated relationship with this place...
Posted by end555 2 years ago Report
That was a good story.
Posted by YepMcNope 2 years ago Report
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Posted by Us3rn4m3 1 year ago Report
I'm way late to the party here but this was such a genuinely fun story. I do tend to get distracted with longer works so i was pretty surprised I sat here and read all this in one sitting! It might sound like a bad thing but at some point it felt like the vore took a backseat even if the characters are literally named around the idea.