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Shore Leave By ahallister -- Report

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A sailor decides she deserves some time away from the ship and discovers too late why the captain was so strict about nobody leaving.

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TMVore

Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report

This was amazing, being aware while cooked, such a rariy! You have gained an instant fan!

ahallister

Posted by ahallister 2 years ago Report

Thank you! I very much plan to have more stories here eventually, and that's likely to be a recurring feature, since I love imagining the entire experience happening to myself.

TMVore

Posted by TMVore 2 years ago Report

Oops, I really should write one myself again!
And I totally get you, Without seeing people enjoy you, it's just not perfect.
I'll be sure to read your next one! <3

2good2btru

Posted by 2good2btru 2 years ago Report

Lovely, I really enjoyed the casualness of the cooking and eating. :3

Siobhan

Posted by Siobhan 2 years ago Report

This was really good. It flows well and is easy to read. The ending makes the reader wonder how the experience in the market is different from the bathhouse.

Good job!

slaveboymeat

Posted by slaveboymeat 2 years ago Report

I loved this! The old trap of not knowing what you're getting into until it's too late. A delightful experience and lovely writing. Thanks for sharing this with me, Ahallister!

tsukaistarburst

Posted by tsukaistarburst 1 year ago Report

I love a cooking vore story with a happy ending! Here's hoping that elf enjoyed many more happy days in an oven~