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Jack angry that women have a new form of power over men. Is resentful of his lover for wanting to partake of unbirthing another person. Knowing he will not get away with killing her, he decides to use a mare. The disease having spread to other mammals and unbirth seems the only way to undo the problem.
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Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
A fun start, I’ll be interested in seeing where you take this. One correction though - a baby horse is a foal, not a fawn. Fawns are deer.
Posted by 100154 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I’ll edit it some time. Any suggestions? I don’t think it will change my plans but I would like to hear what others would like to see.
Posted by Groblek 2 years ago Report
I suspect you’re already planning what I have in mind, which would be for Kelly to come back out as a centaur, and then plot to unbirth Jack as revenge. I’d be tempted to have her revenge be turning him specifically into a centaur mare given his resentment of women’s new power.
Posted by 100154 2 years ago Report
Your right on the first and I’ll definitely consider the second.