Posted by Stealth 2 years ago Report

Source for the thumbnail?

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

Unfortunately don't have it. It was a random discord picture someone sent me a long, long time ago, only reason I had it saved was because I saved it for a reference for what Marian looked like. Sorry.

Posted by sadcat 2 years ago Report

Took me 30 minutes, but lemme be the sauce king:
https://twitter.com/katohayabusa29/status/1499655887438417922?s=20&t=oaqEyHT_tOoMj5M0nWO3Yg

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

what a god!

Posted by Stealth 2 years ago Report

Absolute legend

Posted by bigboy1992 2 years ago Report

This was a nice read! Are you going to possibly do a sequel to this? I'm interested in seeing what happens to Malcolm when he meets Marian again.

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

I did definitely have a few ideas for a couple follow ups with Marian, I didn't want to risk overdoing it because I like her having that air of mystery in regards to what exactly is in her stomach. If we spend a little too much time with her the answer will become sort of unavoidable. But I am glad you liked it! :D

Posted by tgawsome 2 years ago Report

Now that was a good read.

I love Malcolm and how he handles the little "predicaments" he finds himself in. It's not often I read a story where we have more of an observer's POV of things, usually, it's from the Pred's Pov or the prey's. So this is a nice change of pace.

I don't want to spoil but I love how you described Mary's belly, the noises it makes, and how she interacts with it. I love a pred that treats their belly like the wonderful pet it truly is.

I did notice a few grammar and spelling errors but nothing that really pulled me away from the story. Also, the spacing between paragraphs is too scrunched up and it kinda makes it hard to read, but I chalk that up to Eka's portal not formating word documents properly.

Overall this is a fun and interesting read! Glad to see you uploaded this story.

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

Yeah Malcolm is a go with the flow kind of guy. Very easy to self insert as. Mary is just a treat. :3

Yeah proofreading is just not my strong suit. I read through these things like 5 times before uploading them and I still miss stuff lmao

I'm still getting used to Eka's as a website, so I'm testing some stuff with the formatting as well, seeing how stuff looks and what works better and stuff. I swear the spacing looks good on the document, but Eka's kinda does whatever it wants with .doc files lmao

All that being said I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Posted by tgawsome 2 years ago Report

I feel your pain with the formatting as I do writing myself on the site. I have found that double spacing, the document does help..

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

Thanks for the tip! :D

Posted by xvx17 2 years ago Report

I definitely love Malcolm's character, I feel somewhat identified, traveling on the subway without headphones is the worst. The "mother" is also so easygoing, she doesn't bother to hide her behavior in front of other people. I look forward to reading what will happen between the two of them afterwards.

By the way, you are free to upload your stories however you want, but I would appreciate it if you didn't upload it as a pdf as that would make it difficult for me to translate it, since my mother tongue is not English.

Posted by NinjaKillingKnight 2 years ago Report

Oh! Okay that's interesting. I'll make sure to upload as a .doc from now on, I liked them better that way anyway. I'm both surprised and happy to see that so many people like Malcolm so much lmao
But glad you enjoyed it! Hopefully we will see more of these two in the future.

Posted by CopyCat981 2 years ago Report

Very interesting story. Wonder if she will actually fall for Malcolm. Have him possibly be willing prey but one she doesn't digest just eats for pleasure.

Posted by bbwlover2809 2 years ago Report

Aw shit, I loved the belly description in this, would very much love to see what happened after this in a sequel.

Posted by WatermelonArtist 1 year ago Report

lovely story! would love to read a sequel someday! :D

Posted by voredrawing 7 months ago Report

Managed to stumble upon this story and it was great! Loved the mystery and description behind it. Would love to see something similar to this in the future:)