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A couple's Thanksgiving plans are ruined by a freezer malfunction. Luckily, a new app called Voredash offers one-hour delivery of fresh meat!
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Posted by macfinn99 2 years ago Report
I like it when the chefs have interaction with the entree. I rather wish that you used Josh and Kate from "Special Delivery" so that this would be a continuation of the characters.
Posted by HotProtein 2 years ago Report
Thank you for the comment/feedback! This was originally a continuation of "Special Delivery" but I wanted the husband to be less experienced than Josh and need a bit of coaching from his enthusiastic wife throughout the story. I will definitely consider connecting stories more in the future!
Posted by macfinn99 2 years ago Report
Special Delivery left an opening for having the meatgirl arrive a week or so early. There could be interaction not only with Josh and Kate but also with the teenage daughter and their young but curious son. (socially or helpingw in the kitchen.)
Have you thought about doing a restaurant or butcher shop story? I would love to see a restaurant story with both meatgirls and meatboys as minimally clad comestible wait staff. Interesting conversations might be had with the customers when their waitress recommends one of the other wait staff would be tastier.
Do you have story topics that you prefer to do or prefer to not do?