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Edward, Amy, and Jenny are about to have a snail eating competition.
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Posted by Rothar 2 years ago Report
Are you actually a person and not some kind of bot?
Cause your "stories" are just short headers, no substance or real time taken into them and like 80% of your thumbnails are A.I generated.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
I am an actual person. I use Craiyon for most of my thumbnails. So, I am 100% not robot.
Posted by Rothar 2 years ago Report
Well then, i don't want to discourage your creativity, but. You might want to put a bit more time into your stories before posting them.
Its pushing it to even call them stories if they're as short as a haiku. None of the things you've posted have even required scrolling. I'm not saying you should aim for harry potter level lenght, but. At least push for like 1 page or so if you're writing something.
Because being short like this, they're more so a waste of peoples' time more than anything.
Also: Arial, Calibri, Verdana, Roboto.
Use one of those text fonts, not "Impact".
Reading something entirely written in impact font is painful on the eyes.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Okay. Arial then.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Also, I am sorry that I hurt people's eyes.
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
I really don't wanna be rude, but it might be nice to have some prose.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Like what?
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
Any. Literally any.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Oh.
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
Okay, like... Edward, Jenny and Amy. Who are they? What are they? How old are they? What do they look like? You know?
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Oh yeah. I might try that.
Edward is the naga who ate the other predators. Jenny is the other naga. Amy is the wolf taur.
Edward is 20 years old; Jenny is 18 years old; Amy is 40 years old.
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
Okay, hair color, clothing, eye color, build, any physical characteristics.
Then, where are they? A stadium? An arena? Are they having a contest in a sunny public park? A dusty coliseum? How do they feel about this location? Does Edward enjoy the sun due to his reptilian nature or does he dislike the overcast weather?
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
Where did the snails come from? What kind of snails? Did they hunt them down? Who's cheering? Is snail eating a big deal in this world?
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Ellie catches the snails.
Snail eating is sometimes a big deal but the biggest deal in this world is shark eating.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
It is a stadium and also, I will have the pictures of Amy, Edward, and Jenny when someone draws them.
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
You could just describe them with words, ya know? Like, any kind of descriptive text. Not just them, you say it's a stadium, but what does that mean? Is it packed? Is it built specifically for this purpose?
And you just say he eats them out of nowhere. How does he eat them? Specifically, what actions does he take during the eating process?
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
It is packed and the people who are cheering are the audience.
He swallows them under the tables, so they don't see it.
Posted by Cobbly 2 years ago Report
Okay. So like... put this kind of stuff in the story.
Posted by Mulitpede 2 years ago Report
Okay. I can.