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A Champion's Failure and A Goblin's Feast By FutureBellyAche -- Report

Or Dying in Goblin Guts While Two Perverts Watch.

Ahlyx is journeyed champion, fighting for his name to be known across the land. His ally, Synthia does the same to bring her god fame.

But ego corrupts the mind. Overconfidence is an insidious killer. Almost as lethal as bathing in a vat of goblin gut juices. Failure at that level is as humiliating as your compatriot seeing you writhe in a goblin's belly, while she's groped and teased by the dungeon's master. Who knows what dastardly acts she's doing to that innocent priest?

All theoretical, of course. A champion would never lose to a goblin, right?

Hehehe...

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A commission for  soyaEgg
Always a pleasure to work with them ^^

It's funny I only have a few fantasy pieces in my gallery, because I do adore writing in that setting. Magic is such a fun lewd modifier~

Also tried a new image thing, since this story has multiple preds. Figured it would be worth seeing how it turned out! Seems a bit zoomed out though. Hmmm :>

Another commission down means another slot open. Feel free to DM me if you have any interest, any info can be found in the tab as well.

Thumbnail art can be found:
https://ko-fi.com/album/Shirt-Cut-Meme-A0A573SCW#galleryItemView
and here
https://de.sex.com/pin/60233545-tifa-black-mage/

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soyaEgg

Posted by soyaEgg 2 years ago Report

Lose how? Getting digested by a hot goblin is a win in my eyes

DarkCloset

Posted by DarkCloset 2 years ago Report

Excuse me my good person but is "Overconfidence is an insidious killer." line from Darkest Dungeon by chance?

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

Yes indeed. theres no real connection in the story but its a really good line. I havent even played the game, and ive heard it.

DarkCloset

Posted by DarkCloset 2 years ago Report

Ah very good.

panzerkampfvorgen

Posted by panzerkampfvorgen 2 years ago Report

All that is needed now is a good Paladin who can learn Revive and this "problem" is solved. *person to the side of the stage whispers something to the announcer* What's that? You need a body to use that spell? Pfft. Just get Greater Revival! *more whispering* Shush, don't make me get Thera!

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

I tend to default to Dungeons and Dragon's Resurrection rules. And sadly, that says that "If its soul is free and willing, the target returns to life with all its Hit Points."
Our poor priestess seems quite delighted in her new fate. Corrupted down to her very soul. I don't believe she'd wish to part with her new master.

Fatedmeal

Posted by Fatedmeal 2 years ago Report

Gotta say that I enjoyed the spectrum of digestion that you explored in this story. From agonizingly lengthy to painfully swift.

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 2 years ago Report

hehe. I also really liked that dynamic. Torturoursly short and long. It was a fun idea definitely.

Corvum

Posted by Corvum 2 years ago Report

Goblin Pred who´s in over her head is such a mood!
Such a lucky hero~

RoTheHuman

Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report

I enjoyed Synthia's transformation from a pious chaste priestess to a depraved ever-horny gutslut. :-D

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report

*Timely response im totally good with answering comments*
The best kind of transformation~

RoTheHuman

Posted by RoTheHuman 1 year ago Report

Timely responses are the best!! ^_^

Xoxoxhuy

Posted by Xoxoxhuy 1 year ago Report

OMG YOU ARE THE GOAT, I don't know how you keep on doing it but every story you make is just pure gold and nothing else. I just love everthing you make, one of my favorite things about you is how you right more with the actual thought and emotions the people must be thinking and how you always leave a amazing ending.

FutureBellyAche

Posted by FutureBellyAche 1 year ago Report

<3
This one was an amazing commission. Was very happy to work on it.

Xoxoxhuy

Posted by Xoxoxhuy 1 year ago Report

Man can tell, I just love how unfair and bullshit it was to die like that, yet how fair and how its so possible. The fact that his beloved friend could end it at any time but watches him slowly die the love making that happend while hes dying. you are GOOOOLLLLLDDDDDDDDDDDD. Im sorry if it sounds like im over egging the pudding but I feel like I just have to talk about how every last part of this was amazing, also just love the way you never run out of discribing a very thicc women. I know I asked if I could make a comic about the mother one and I never finshed it, but that was because of familly issues that are finally over, although the momentum and drive to make it has fallen. Maybe somewhere in the future Ill make it. But anyway, im not sure if you are the right person to ask, but would you be cool if I tried to make a comic off of this?