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The Elevator [F/M, OV] By JohnnySniper -- Report

Grant is minding his own business, returning from the building's basement after taking out the trash.

Up he goes in the elevator, back to his home, only for the tallest, most curvaceous, gorgeous red-haired woman to walk in.

After a little chat, and a small accident, they soon find themselves with plenty of time to get to know each other.

But is it really worth it, when her stomach growls as loudly as it does?

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Phew, fun one. I had this idea for a little while, and finally put it to action. I wanted it to be much shorter than what it really was.

I had an idea, but cut it from this due to the length, where she's much kinder. She basically stores him, takes him home, has a lot of fun with her side passenger. It'd be a much more sexually charged and willing/caring end - I might get round to it!

Anyways, thanks again. Donate if you like!

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Graves

Posted by Graves 2 years ago Report

You're a seriously good writer, I'm a huge fan.

JohnnySniper

Posted by JohnnySniper 2 years ago Report

Thank you so much for your kind words, they mean so much to me! Really happy you enjoyed this story and Grant's demise :)

MyDuck

Posted by MyDuck 2 years ago Report

WOAH! No words only emotions!

JohnnySniper

Posted by JohnnySniper 2 years ago Report

Thank you MyDuck! I hope they're all good emotions!

Tilalumtar

Posted by Tilalumtar 2 years ago Report

Damn, I really enjoy your style of writing! That was so refreshingly good! :3

JohnnySniper

Posted by JohnnySniper 2 years ago Report

Glad you like, Tilalumtar! Much appreciated <3

Someone5793

Posted by Someone5793 2 years ago Report

Outstanding story. Big fan of this level of size difference but usually if you look at giantess stuff it’s macro/micro. Good job

JohnnySniper

Posted by JohnnySniper 2 years ago Report

Thank you so much for this comment! It's my favourite kind of size difference.

Allows the prey to still be a sizeable meal, with lots of nice, tight segments, whilst the pred doesn't have to struggle all too much to get them down :)

Harharharhah123

Posted by Harharharhah123 2 years ago Report

This is some quality writing even without vore. Absolutely amazing

JohnnySniper

Posted by JohnnySniper 2 years ago Report

Appreciate this! I'm eventually trying to write a novel one day, compliments on the writing style fuels me.

WolfbaneSoldier

Posted by WolfbaneSoldier 1 year ago Report

Well it was almost great, until it was fatal.. why are these things allways fatal, like finding a needle in a heighstack to find just entrapment these days

JohnnySniper

Posted by JohnnySniper 1 year ago Report

Hey! I'm glad you almost enjoyed this story, but I wonder if you almost didn't miss the fatal tag?

I recommend you search entrapment in the tags, and look out for fatal if that's not something you enjoy. I also recommend not commenting on works that aren't your kinks like this.

It won't suddenly turn the works into what you want, and the artist/writer certainly won't magic up some for you!