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The Things I do for You By RavenRoberts -- Report

Commissioned piece ^///^

Trying a few new things here - format should hopefully just be readable without downloading or chewing up my paragraphs... please? Please please let me know if this is better for people

pdfs are just so much cleaner :<

and also, yay custom thumbnail! full image can be found on my patreon



If you're interested in a commission, get in touch via PM ~ I only bite if you want me to


And my ebooks are available here - https://www.amazon.com/~/e/B088PWH4FH

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Sehnsucht

Posted by Sehnsucht 2 years ago Report

Works perfectly on my mobile. Better than 95% of stories on this site, which I guess are .docx or something. Formatting looks good too.

All of which is to say nothing of the story itself. I found it riveting. Can't remember if I posted comments elsewhere, but mainly: her greed and the casual way she eats made me squirm. It's so... I don't know. Like devouring others is the most natural thing in the world. It feels so right.

What follows between them is filthy and I love it. The narrative voice keeps dropping into dirty talk and it feels raw and sexy.

Oh! I never said anything about the art! Was blown away! Those _tails_: I love the way you draw hair/fur! Really enjoying your painting focus, recently :3

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 2 years ago Report

I'm a little miffed that it only picks up my indents about half way through, but I guess it's fine... ty for the advice

was verr happy with how the painting turned out ^///^ it actually looks like what I tried to draw

King05

Posted by King05 2 years ago Report

This is incredibly sexy, keep up the amazing work

Also this works perfectly on mobile, i rather this over pdfs if im being honest

RavenRoberts

Posted by RavenRoberts 2 years ago Report

Thank you! <3

and I appreciate the feedback - maybe I'll make this the standard then