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Burning Jealousy 2: new rivals By RichardBlake -- Report

After the last adventure with Cindy and her perverted trainer Tyler have managed to get their sinful butts down to Solaceon Town and run into a perculiar side-effect of the Bunny's previous gluttonous behavior...

Looking for privacy, they instead found the pretty face of what would undoubtedly end up being a rival for Tyler's love-confused heart.

...Too bad for them that this story isn't named 'Heated Threeway..." instead...

Commission Work
Writing by me.
Commissioned by Anonymous.
Thumbnain by Asaneman, used with permission.
Thumbnail art: https://d.furaffinity.net/art/asaneman/1593819243/1593819270.asaneman_cinderaceav9.png
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RexLou

Posted by RexLou 2 years ago Report

Very good story. I like how blatantly Cinderace took advantage of Tyler, using him to get more meals and using him to get her own pleasure in. I enjoyed Tyler's perspective as well, both in his moral confusion and how love-drunk he is for Cindy's growing body.

Lots of other good stuff as well. I really like how you mixed in burps with Cindy's words, showing just how casual this is for her. She doesn't view any of these Pokemon as equals or trainers as human: they're just food.

RichardBlake

Posted by RichardBlake 2 years ago Report

They're rivals and obstacles... She just needed a good way to get rid of them.

Can't find a body if that body is turned into ass-fat.

RexLou

Posted by RexLou 2 years ago Report

That she can't. Any body makes a good addition on her bunny-butt.

RasenGun37

Posted by RasenGun37 2 years ago Report

Fucking amazing! I hope part 3 is as sexy and well written as this one is!

hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 2 years ago Report

"the walls around him tightened like a frustrated writer crumpling up a draft he hated"
Cool metaphor

RichardBlake

Posted by RichardBlake 2 years ago Report

Funnily enough, despite using the metaphor, I don't do that myself.

Mostly because I actually quite like my writing and don't waste drafts, and secondly because I can't crumple up digital paper.

hyhyd

Posted by hyhyd 2 years ago Report

lmao