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Padmè's Snack on the way to Ryloth By teamfortress32 -- Report

A sequel to Supreme Chancellor Padme. Padme can't wait to have sex with her husband and have him help torment the souls she's trapped on her body, but Ahsoka interrupts them, drawing Padme's ire.

This is an RP between myself and Trying124 which I have lightly edited for spelling, grammar, chronology, and general readability. If you like it, please do take a look at their work.

Also, HUGE thanks to feauxen for fixing the formatting on this one, namely the invisible characters that would only show up for me once I uploaded the story.

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end555

Posted by end555 2 years ago Report

That was a good story.

feauxen

Posted by feauxen 2 years ago Report

I don't normally like non-con, but I can't lie, I'd love to see more of this. The way Padme just corrupts everything about her victims all while keeping them trapped as sentient fat...it's magnificent.

Also, if you're interested, I edited a copy of this story so that it doesn't have all those annoying spaces in the words where invisible characters have snuck in somehow, as well as making a few of the less coherent sentences more meaningful.

teamfortress32

Posted by teamfortress32 2 years ago Report

I would love a version of this without the invisible characters, I kept trying to edit it and I couldn't figure out how to get rid of them. Beyond that, stay tuned. I'm editing a sequel to this one at the moment, and it will have even more corruption ;)