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Another drabble from long ago that I completed and polished up during my spare time.
Things at Beacon Academy are getting out of hand BIG time. The ladies of the school have become all supersized and super-hungry. It's only a matter of time before some voracious shenanigans begin.
I always liked the idea of the classic "vore chain" of sequential swallows of other predators.
Hope you all Enjoy!
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Posted by miner249er 2 years ago Report
how is team JNPR doing?
Posted by Davyjones 2 years ago Report
Who knows? I'd imagine Nora is probably thriving in this type of situation
Posted by Flame14 2 years ago Report
It’s a little surprising to that this wasn’t brought over sooner. As I said when I commented on DA, I’m always saddened to see my favorite girl, Velvet, be at the bottom of the food-chain. Hopefully you still have some works that show the bunny girl coming out on top.
Still seeing my favorite main girl, Weiss, come out the victor of this little vore chain was an enjoyable surprise and something I wish we could see more of.
Always glad to see more of a favorite authors work, especially when they’ve stopped being active for so long. Hope you still have some more old works that might get released later down the line.
Posted by Davyjones 2 years ago Report
Yeah I still dabble with ideas and shorter stories every now and then.
And yes Weiss as the biggest pred is a nice change of pace given how often she's either the smallest or the prey.
Also yes I was honestly surprised that I hadn't uploaded it here yet too lol
Posted by Goldendevil21 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much for another RWBY vore story.
Once again, great job on the grammar. Did not see many word misspelling. The sentence structures were also great. Though did have a nick pick of the font being super small. Not sure how you see it but the font size is really small. Had to increase the zoom to read the story.
On to the plot, once again, great. The execution of how we go from Ruby already with a live meal in her belly and extra puffy. And also enjoyed how the story admitted Ruby fought unfairly. Going for her when her back was turned instead of a straight fight. Even the part where her cape ended up being her downfall to Yang was a great touch as it felt like karma.
Just loved Yang's description. Never get tired of all the ways you explain her design. The line, Th e hefty boobs were highlighted more than hidden by her shirt. A generous portion of under-boob could be seen peeking out from under the fabric and a large canyon of cleavage was on fully display too.' Just loved the large canyon of cleavage.
Also loved the part Blake met Emerald inside Weiss' belly. For one, reinforces just how HUGE Weiss is now where Blake and Emerald can be inside her belly yet still have the space to not immediately notice each other. Second, Was just so sexy to read.
Posted by Davyjones 2 years ago Report
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Yeah I realize now that I should have increased the font size in the program I used to type this up.
Very glad to read that you enjoyed all the details and little bits in the story It means a lot to me given that I feel like a lot of mt effort goes into said descriptions.
And yes I love how huge Weiss was in the end too.
Posted by Litanus 2 years ago Report
Always love reading your stuff, and with how long it’s been this was a real treat
Posted by Vindath 2 years ago Report
Great story! Fatties eating fatties is a cool theme.
Posted by Davyjones 2 years ago Report
Aye I agree 100% its a theme I wish we could see more of.