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Oh Dear... Earth Writer's tongue seems to have deserted him when he needed it the most! It looks like his article won't get published after all...
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Cover art by Nomi!
Well folks, it was only a 30% chance, but the dice decided it was time for Earth Writer to digest. Don't feel bad for him though, it's how he wanted to go~
And with that, the first arc of this interactive comes to a close, though that's not the end of the story. As each protagonist we follow meets their fate, another of your choice will rise in their place, until the storyline comes to its conclusion. At this point, you have unlocked a choice of two:
1. Akairo Hoshi; hotheaded kirin and first mate on Captain Stitch's Privateer Crew! This will move the story in the direction of high seas adventure!
2. Burgundy Darkpine, top Lunar Enforcement agent. This will continue the story directly, from a different perspective and agenda
Also, in addition to votes, could you tell me what you thought of this scene, and the story overall? It's the first actual vore that I've posted in public, and I'd like some feedback on it. I might also end up setting a few one-shot stories in this setting, too, if folks find it appealing.
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Voting is closed; I will be reorganizing the Gallery here to archive this arc and put the new one front and center.
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Posted by marceber 2 years ago Report
I'll vote for the character that isn't a stallion, whoever that may be
Posted by SilentOne 2 years ago Report
Both are mares, actually. And I'm quite interested in how you thought of the scene, as you're a writer in this space and I've quite enjoyed reading your work!
Posted by marceber 2 years ago Report
The scene was amazing. Real hot and well executed. I can't really think of any improvements to it. 10 points.
Also, I think I'll go for Burgundy then. I like the idea of changing agenda with each death.
Posted by SilentOne 2 years ago Report
Aww, thanks! Hope to continue with the good quality going forward!
Posted by ThaliaSnek 2 years ago Report
Definitely off the bat voting for Akairo, as expected as this may be.
This was a curious and fun depiction for a vore scene, very different from that which i usually see with ya, And definitely very enjoyable to read through.
First arc's been a fun read, and I'm eager to see where community voting takes this next~
Posted by SilentOne 2 years ago Report
Thanks, I did want to try out a few things. I do usually go for a different fate from mere oblivion after digestion, but trapping the consciousness in an eternal dream-image seemed appropriate to the storyline.
Posted by ThaliaSnek 2 years ago Report
Will say, something i wouldn't mind toying around with at some point in the future.
Posted by Jamesbrid 2 years ago Report
The Luna enforcer let’s stay in Equestria for a while, as fun as a high seas adventure would be it might make it harder for you.
Posted by SleepySleepy 2 years ago Report
Burgundy Darkpine; I definitely want to see Luna's agenda realized in full.
Posted by UNSC 2 years ago Report
Lets follow Burgundy
Posted by jjlava 2 years ago Report
This was really well done, I was kind of invested in dropping that story and seeing what trouble that stirred up but oh well. Damn, it seems like he even ended up melting with blue balls as well.
Gotta love a hothead. I'm voting 1.