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Tags: audience Blonde Girl blonde prey Blood Bones in scat Broken Bones bulge outline bulged belly Crying Crying for help crying out crying prey Curious Observer Descriptive Digested digested alive Digestion Digestion Noises digestive juices Disposal entertainment explanation Feral Feral Pred fighting in stomach fighting prey Flailing flailing legs flat chest Giant Snake Gore hair in scat Hard Digestion Interested onlooker Kicking Legs Livestream Livestreaming makeup Oral Vore pale skin Panty Shot recorded vore recording Saliva scared scared prey scientific curiosity screaming screaming prey screaming while swallowed skirt skirt lift sleeveless shirt Snake Snake/F sneakers Soft Vore Struggling struggling in stomach Struggling prey Struggling prey inside suffering Twitching Twitching Prey Unwilling Unwilling Prey zoo
Bit of a Warning : This story gets pretty gruesome when it comes to describing digestion. I didn't do a full proof-reading, but I think everything should sound right.
Hey all! As I said in my little blog post, this one is a really long story, so I hope you enjoy it, if you don't feel like reading it all maybe look around in it to see if there's anything you like.
I was really into this when writing it, and I do really like it, I hope you do as well. Maybe tell me a creature or animal or monster I could use in a new story to get some ideas.. well, bye now.
Posted by coldwar368 2 years ago Report
I feel like giraffes and dogs are not used enough as preds that could be cool!
As foe this story, I adore the length, the apathy of the crowd, the digestion! This was just a great read
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much for the comment!! I'm happy you like this longer story, and yes I enjoyed having the crowd be apathetic to it as well. I do agree, dogs I feel are a bit harder, but you could possibly do something good with giraffes considering their necks.
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Maybe I'll do something with a Giraffe someday, it sounds fun.
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Posted by Ooubliette 2 years ago Report
this is your best story yet and it was a super exciting to read!! and it was enjoyable throughout even though it was a longer story. it had some cool and shocking twists and the teacher and particularly the snake and how it got the girl were cool too!
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Thank you! I'm so glad that it was all enjoyable!
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Posted by grz01 2 years ago Report
A wonderful story thanks, love the detail.
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Posted by Keikaa4 1 year ago Report
Ah, thank you for a comment! What details did you like most? I'm thinking about starting my next story soon.
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