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Tags: ?/F Blonde Blonde Girl blonde prey Blood Bones Brainless Pred cameltoe Cave Crying Crying for help crying prey Descriptive Detailed Digestion Digested digested alive digested prey Digestion Digestion Noises disarmed prey drooling prey drowning drowning prey Dumb Pred erect nipples Fantasy fantasy setting Fantasy world fighting fighting prey Flailing flailing legs flat chest Guro Hard Digestion hopeless prey Human Prey injury naked prey Oblivious Pred Quest scared scared prey screaming screaming prey screaming while swallowed Short Hair skirt lift Slime Slime pred slime vore small breasts smaller pred Soft Vore Struggling Struggling prey Struggling prey inside tight clothes tight fit Unwilling Unwilling Prey vomit vomiting prey
Just a bit of warning, as with most of my stories, the digestion is pretty detailed.
Hey everyone! I thought when I started this that it'd be a little short, and I guess it is. But then when writing I got so into the digestion and everything that it ended up being a pretty decent length! I hope you enjoy this one, I really loved the idea.
Please tell me what you think in the comments!
Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I do love some detailed digestion, the head sticking out to see everything was a nice idea.
It reminded me of this for some reason, https://www.furaffinity.net/view/12053941/
Now I kind of want to see a remorseful slime pred with a partial digestion turned endo situation.
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Thank you so much for the comment!! I'm curious, ehat does 'turned endo' mean? Does it mean the slime uses the digested remains as like, a body for itself? Or something else?
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
I means the pred in the middle of digesting the prey when it gets second thoughts.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/31044335/
Check the tags of this one below before one reads it, it is not sexual
https://aryion.com/g4/view/157718
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Oh! So you mean, in this case at least, the slime would have Nia inside and when she's partially digested the slime spits her out. Do you mean alive in your idea? I personally kind of like the idea if she's digested enough to be killed and then spit up.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Well I was planning for the prey to live, though she would need care to survive because she would be graphically injured, think of it like a burn victim,
The dead idea does sound interesting through
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
I like the dead idea because I like putting myself in the shoes of a cute girl that has terrible things done to her. So something like that is gross and embarrassing to me.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
If you like gross and embarssing, what do you make of this Author, his prey usually survive but there pride does not. https://www.furaffinity.net/gallery/inconspicuousraptor21/
Or for a more female prey styled work.
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/46100272/
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the replies, I love them.
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
No problem, though I will say I guess it's not really my favourite, predators like that aren't something that I care for too much. And for me death is usually something that I prefer to happen.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Thanks for the replies.
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Posted by Randomdude5 2 years ago Report
That was more brutal than I expected. I felt sorry for Nia, even tho I wanted her to be digested. I liked the detailed digestion, and will happily read more stories that you write.
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Aha!! Thank you so much!! Yess when I was writing it, especially at the start I felt so bad knowing what was gonna happen to her, I was kinda thinking to myself how I wanted it to happen and how I wanted her to sound trying to act out the sounds haha!
I'm so happy you liked it. Feeling bad for the prey is something I like a lot when I read it since I put myself in her shoes.
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Same here, I like brutally graphic digestion, but it can be rough sometimes,
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Most graphic stories I have read,
Wrecking the curve
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/21906423/
Oha lord of the mountain,
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/12053941/
The vore story I found the saddest.
https://aryion.com/g4/view/804218#2938599
Crimson beast.
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
Well, personally I don't have as much of an interest for those sorts of scenarios, but I'm glad to know that you do enjoy a more graphic digestion!
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Posted by Mechdragon1k 2 years ago Report
Question do you like messy/gross guts, as in a lot of chyme and other stuff smelly stuff in belly.
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Posted by Keikaa4 2 years ago Report
I usually don't mention it in any of my writings that involve a creatures stomach, I don't mind it being gross at all, but I just never go into that.
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Posted by Ooubliette 2 years ago Report
Uwa, I loved this one!! Really intense action along the whole story and the girl and her struggle feels very realistic. Some things are really pushed and I kinda like it, keep it up! It's another improvement as well!
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