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Maizey the cow always wanted a child of her own. With all preparations made, she makes an appointment for insemination at the clinic. It doesn't go as she expects…
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Posted by Snekpizza 2 years ago Report
Poor cow lady, very hot tho! I like!
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Posted by Snekpizza 2 years ago Report
Will you be making more stories with this bat?
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Posted by ObsidianSnake 2 years ago Report
I'm not currently planning to; I think they'd be repetitive, as this story illustrates the routine. One-shot characters are like that. I'm definitely taking a note on the interest, though!
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Posted by Snekpizza 2 years ago Report
Makes sense, it will get repetitive. Very nice one shot tho!
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Posted by Mourtzouphlos 2 years ago Report
So if I'm putting things together correctly, the secretary has been messing with the appointments to feed people to the bat to get him to come in more often so she'll be able to ask him out and be accepted. But why did the bat and Maizey have different times for the appointment? She was able to just flip tomorrow's appointment, so why was there something extra going on today?
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Posted by ObsidianSnake 2 years ago Report
Ah-ha, the difference is a small plot hole caused by re-writes. They were intended to have the same time, except Maizey would be early. Nice eye for detail! You win:....nothing, sorry. :(
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Posted by Mourtzouphlos 2 years ago Report
:) I actually didn't notice it the first time, but when I got to the end I specifically read through it again a couple times to find those little details and make sure I was able to put everything together.
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